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Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 20:05 · For: Chapter 6: “The best freak I can be”

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 19:56 · For: Chapter 5: The Severe Beating of a Sixteen-year-old Wizard

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 19:48 · For: Chapter 4: Hassseth
Too tired to form a coherent thought/review...just give numbered ratings....7.75/10

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/18/07 19:43 · For: Chapter 3: Magic
Ok, if that's Hedwig, than it's clearly a memory related thing. 9.5/10

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/17/07 21:00 · For: Chapter 2: St. Brutus’s Secure Center for Incurably Criminal Boys
Interesting...the little flashes of canon...Imake the assumption this is either some form of parallel universe where Harry's alternate life is passing through into, or maybe...no, I think I'll wait until I read the rest of the chapters...9.5/10

Name: Helios Sol (Signed) · Date: 12/17/07 20:49 · For: Chapter 1: Memory Loss
*Redirected from Schmerg_the_Impaler's favorite story page* Hmmmm...a rather mysterious beginning, albeit somewhat boring, as you said. I have no idea if you answer these reviews though, so, I suppose it doesn't matter. 8.5/10

Name: Binka Fudge (Signed) · Date: 12/05/07 15:29 · For: Chapter 12: “I smell a rat.”
Wow, what a chapter! I'm loving this story. I've already read the sequel, but when I'm finished here i might go over it again with a fresh perspective. Your writing's brilliant, never give it up!

Name: raquel (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 0:21 · For: Chapter 4: Hassseth
Love it. love it love it ect

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: acciobooks1111 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/22/07 19:01 · For: Chapter 17: Harry’s Dream Girl
thats not right! Hermione is supposed to be awful at quidditch!

Author's Response: If you'll look closely at what I wrote, you'll see that it says that Ron is the Quidditch Captain for Gryffindor, and that Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny are all in Gryffindor House. The chapter does NOT say that they are all on the Quidditch team. Sorry if the way I worded it was confusing.

Name: Ankh of the night (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 14:14 · For: Chapter 7: Ron
Wow. this is brilliant! Your brain must be ANVIL SIZED!

Author's Response: Thanks! ;-)

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 8:47 · For: Chapter 18: Back to the Beginning
in reality i know your chapters are long but they seem to zoom by. thanks for the read. it's been lots of fun.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story again this time around.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 8:15 · For: Chapter 15: Confrontation
i haven't anything positive to say about petunia dursley. we all make choices in life and despite our motives, being a 'good' person is a matter of choosing what we know is right. petunia didn't.

sorry. i didn't mean to preach.

Author's Response: No offense taken; I couldn't agree more. I think Petunia is a really tragic character, because she could have been so much more, yet she chose not to be.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 8:05 · For: Chapter 14: Questions and Answers
i like dumbly-dorre. always have, imperfections et all.

Author's Response: Me too. It gets really tiresome reading stories that portray him as a devious manipulator who only cares about Harry as a weapon. Makes me wonder if some authors are taking lessons from Rita Skeeter... ;-)

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:56 · For: Chapter 13: The Burrow
i love his dreamgirl. it's very romantic. and i like the way their relationship develops. ginny's not intrusive or sure which is endearing.

why hasn't harry connected the tall gangly boy in his dream with ron?

Author's Response: Thanks. I really wanted to write something where they didn't get together right away, but the reasons for putting it off were real, not silly teen angst that could be resolved with one short conversation. I'm pretty sure Harry had already decided that the gangly boy in his dream was Ron, although I might not have specifically said so. Thanks for reviewing!

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:46 · For: Chapter 12: “I smell a rat.”
hedwig could have led him to hogwarts. just a thought.

Author's Response: That's a good point, actually. I don't think it ever even crossed my mind. I guess I'll chalk this up to something Harry didn't think of because he was too distraught and frightened to really think straight.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:44 · For: Chapter 11: Correspondence
thank GOD tyler doesn't develop a serious relationship with cho. how wierd would that be?

thanks for the read.

what was your interpretation of ginny's 'bright eyes?' i always think of her with light brown eyes but i suppose dark eyes can be bright too. (though it sounds like a bit of a contradiction)

Author's Response: Yeah, Tyler/Cho would be a little odd. About Ginny's eyes -- I've always taken 'bright' in this sense to mean that her eyes seem to have an inner light that makes them seem full of life. Have you ever met anyone like that? If you haven't, you should. ;-) So, not quite like Dumbledore's trademark twinkle, but something along those same lines.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:28 · For: Chapter 10: Hermione
and the fun begins.

it's such a GOOD story! do you know how hard it is to find interesting plot in a well written hand? COMPLETE, no less?

sorry. now i'm ranting. anyway, thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually do know how hard it is. I've read pretty much all the completed stories on a couple of HP fanfiction sites, and I have a really hard time finding anything interesting anymore. That's part of the reason I write so much; if I can't find an interesting story, I'll make my own! ;-)

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:08 · For: Chapter 8: Practice Makes Perfect
good read, thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 7:03 · For: Chapter 7: Ron
freakin' a, i did it again! i had to come back to this chapter to review. ah well.

i like that harry's amnesia is a real problem. you didn't cop out with some lame excuse for his memory to come back- a lot of times writers gets so excited they'll rush events. but your story has an easy pace that doesn't drag or skip crucial moments to get to 'the good stuff.'

thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's really hard not to just skip to 'the good stuff,' so I'm glad to hear that I was able to pull it off here.

Name: staggered incite (Signed) · Date: 09/28/07 6:45 · For: Chapter 6: “The best freak I can be”
sigh, i almost forgot again.

it's interesting to see harry in a setting so different from the magical world or the dursleys- a slight improvement, really from his relatives. well, tyler's an improvement anyway.

thanks for the read.

Author's Response: Thanks; glad it's unique.

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