WIN!
Author's Response: LOSE!rn... Kidding, obviously. Thank you =)
This story explained so much...in my eyes. I love it!
Author's Response: Really? Yay!rnThank you!
Quite amusing. That is reallly the most important thing to say. :)
Author's Response: Oh, but of course. I aim to gently amuse, and perhaps even slightly entertain.rnThank you!
i always knew the real story would be something like this! lol... nice job- "Prongs, are you strutting?"
~Padfoot
Author's Response: >< Yeah, it ain't the most original and ingenious of plots. Thank you though. I really really am my harshest critic.
haha thats really funny.
"Prongs, are you strutting?"
" Yes, I suppose I am."
Haha thats hilarious. Too bad James didn't raise harry, really. if james is half of what these fanfic ppl make out, he'd be one helluva dad. good jobs!
Author's Response: ^^ I can't help but play James up a bit. He'd have been an interesting father, that's for sure.rnBut even more, can you imagine if Harry had him for a father AND Sirius, Remus and Peter as uncles? Madness, I tell you!
Sooooo funny!
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much!
very nice, i applaud your portrayal of james. good work!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^rnPersonally, I think even I have written better portrayals of young Mr. Potter, but that's gratifying.
This is a good story...
I can just see someone pulling open their friends curtains and exclaming "Goood Morning!!"haha
Author's Response: 'Specially someone like James, I hope.rnThanks!
hahhahaha funny my friend emailed this to me im glad she did! =) cool story keep up da good work!
Author's Response: Wow! That's lovely of you to mention.rnAhem. And I'm glad you didn't decide, in response, to no longer be her friend. ^^rnThanks for reviewing.
*giggle* I like how you used "git". You did a super fantastic job showing the bound between the marauders too. *gigle*
Author's Response: *Bow* Ah, I'm a sucker for friendships like those between the Marauders.rnThank you!
Pretty Awesome! But it seemed as if you were luring us into the story and this cutting the string. You have some good talent, now make a use of them! :) Meaning: WRITE MORE!!! Your fantastic.
-Lauren
Pretty Awesome! But it seemed as if you were luring us into the story and this cutting the string. You have some good talent, now make a use of them! :) Meaning: WRITE MORE!!! Your fantastic.
-Lauren
Author's Response: Man, there ain't much greater praise you can give to a writer, especially for something like this.rnThank you. And yes Ma'am. ^^
Marvelous! I love how you inserted James "strutting" here or "strutting" there, so as to make sure we didn't forget.
It's rather a weird coincidence, but I've always thought that scene with Harry in Snape's office was rather...funny. Perhaps it's just because "strut" is a funny word. So, I sincerely thank you for unknowingly answering my 'why-does-James-strut' question.
-Becca
And no, it's NOT a load of old tosh!
Author's Response: ^^ Heh. I'm glad your first comment about my repeating the fact that James is strutting was not 'zomg we get it omg!!!'rnAnd it has been my pleasure.
its great. i would have loved to hear more.
Author's Response: =) Too kind you are. Too kind indeed.rnThe Harry Potter Literary Storm could be classified as more, and it's certainly a lot better.rnThank you.
tosh
Author's Response: Fair enough.
SNOGGALISIOUS
Author's Response: Cheerattitions.rn<3
this story did make me smile. the whole why-snape-says-james-struted is a little not believable, but it's still a very entertaining tale.
Author's Response: >< Yeah, I know it's not overly realistic. Obviously, Snape would have plenty of other reasons for accusing James of strutting about. I just thought, 'What a cute line! How can I exploit this for some cheap comedy?'
hmm...weird!
Author's Response: Heh. Agreed!
That was a very cute story. Very well-written for a one-shot.
Author's Response: I couldn't ask for greater praise. Thank you!
ROTFL!!! Oh Lordy, this was funny. I really liked your style of wwriting this piece.
Author's Response: Oh, how generous. Cheers ^^