This was brilliant, i loved the play acting between Lily and Alice, oh to have such a friend as that. And I found James very enchanting personally. I particularly liked the Peter pan reference.
Not overdone and captures Lily and James perfectly
Oooh, very cute. I like the dialogue between Lily and Alice. And it's nice to see James portrayed as mature, rather than annoying as he usually is. Very good job 10/10 :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I do love Alice and Lily's rather interesting banter very much, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think the "immature, annoying as hell"-James Potter does tend to become rather cliche, and Sirius and Remus did say that his head had deflated a bit in his 7th year - so I... expanded. Thanks for the review!
An interesting one-shot. It's so neat to read all the varying ideas on how Lily could have finally fallen for James; you did a good job at setting them on the path. I hope to read more from you.
Author's Response: Thanks MagEd! I'm glad you enjoyed the one-shot. I do have more pieces of fan fiction in the making. One is a chaptered story called "Sixteen is a Number" which you might want to look out for as it will hopefully be on site very soon.
i love everything about this fic!!!!! except its only a one-shot :(
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You're very sweet! Well, don't be disappointed. I intend to write more with Lily and Alice, and have a couple of chaptered stories, one of which will be up soon.