Reviews For Out of the Blue
Reviewer: theawesomeness
Date: 08/29/07 3:09
Chapter: Ginny's Story

awesome! i like how you worked the "another life borrowed" line into the poem, i wouldnt have been able to transform that from the actual quote to my own as gracefully as you did.

Author's Response: AWW thank you very much! I just love the way Harry broke up with Ginny, I mean I hated him for breaking up, but the way he did it was so romantic and i just had to include that line here!...Thanks for the kind review!

Reviewer: emLILY EVANS
Date: 08/19/07 21:09
Chapter: Ginny's Story

mad good u rox

Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: the_yaks_second
Date: 06/28/07 14:13
Chapter: Ginny's Story


I loved the feelings in the poem and how in-charcter it was. I know you love Ginny (as do I!) so here is a plea for you to write a lot more stories/poems from her POV (and if this is ignored I will turn to more...violent....measures *rubs hands together in Mr Burns-esque way*).

Author's Response: ehm...Ok, Holly's willing to take violent measures on me! I have a MURDERER ON MY REVIEW PAGE! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!.........*stops being cheest for a second to actually answer your review*....thanks,Holly, I'll make sure to write more Ginny in the future, possible after DH, i need more material to interpret her im going to go protect my MSN contact list from you...*twitch*..... :-)

Reviewer: Lady Snuffles
Date: 06/02/07 0:03
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Very Nice. Story poetry is a favorite of mine.

Author's Response: Thanks LadySnuffles, I love to tell sories in poetry, i think theyre the best ways to tell them......

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 04/26/07 15:24
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Wow... you did such a good job on this. My favorite part is probably the stanza before the last one. I could just see the sad smile and his turning away. *sigh* So sad. Even though this includes the breakup and how they can't be together- it was still fluffy.Nice job!

Author's Response: why thank you! :-)...i believe ive read some of ur poems before but since my computer is being stupid these days i didnt bother to review..if i can remember correctly, hehe, maybe i did leave one... anywho, this one is probably my favorite out of all of them, i think the deepest and the nicest, overall...thanks! :-)

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/29/07 17:44
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Wow, I love this...great job.

Favorite line (you'll get used to it - I find my favorite line on every review):
And at last I told him that I had never gave up my wishing,
And he smiled so sadly, and I felt my heart breaking…
…And he turned his back on all, and away he marched…

Yeah...I like the stuff that differs from the rest of the good job! I love this! (Did I say that already?)

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: s'ok, i like finding fav lines, too!!! Thanks im happy you like it and i liked that line too! Thanks for reviewing and i love that tyger thing!! :-)

Reviewer: hogwartsrules
Date: 01/27/07 14:35
Chapter: Ginny's Story

that was sosososososo good... 1000/10

Author's Response: HI ! :-) Thanks so much for the 1000! I'm sooooooooooo happy that u liked it!

Reviewer: J_Bird
Date: 01/27/07 11:00
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Good ol' Ginny. =D She always had a thing for Harry I soppose. I liked it, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: THANNNKKK YOUUUU! :-) I know what you mean about ginny. It was just always there. Thanks for the kind review!

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 01/05/07 22:23
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Ok, not to be obnoxious, but- funny odd or funny humourous? Harry/Luna does make a lot of sense when you get right down to it. Wait.... this isn't spam... is it?

Author's Response: i dont think so. I mean, it's not like ur doing this to have more reviews right? Anyway i think its funny both ways. I don't hate it, thats for sure. I think its very odd for them to get together because luna isn't romantic for harry, she serves the purpose as the voice of truth, i guess. and it IS humorous. I couldn imagine the the fiaso (no offence intended at all). But c'mon, im a SUPER DUPER H/G shipper. :-D

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 01/03/07 16:26
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Well, I owe you some reviews, I believe? I won't be obnoxious and go into how I'mm not all that fond of H/G or my endless reasons why he's better with Luna. I ignored the ship and read the poem, so yay me. Ahem... Yes. That was very good, actually. Some of the phrases were a bit awkward, but I enjoyed it, particulary the last stanza. Now off to read the other two!

Author's Response: thanks for the criticism. :-). I love te last stanza, too. I'm off to see ur other reviews!.. And i think Harry/Luna is funny, but i don;t hate them like i hate Harry/Hermione shippers...;-)

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 12/01/06 23:55
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Hee hee i just realized the title is bold.... *laughs for unexplained reason*... hee hee...

Author's Response: hehe..ur laughing is contagious!! did the mods let through ur new chapter yet???..UR GREAT!!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 11/26/06 16:03
Chapter: Ginny's Story

To say you are talented is a total UNDERDTATEMENT!!!!!! Whoa, got carried away there. This was sooo good! I love the title. I'm glad you left a review on the review page for EEIF, 'cuz that's how I found your author's page and this poem! ok rambling...too much sugar
Nice : )

Author's Response: well HELLO tharrrr!! happy that my reviewing on EEIF has done something and now, after more than a month..i have 20 reviews!!! check out my other poem, ya like the author page? kinda lame, think...hehe...ill check urs out...IM HAPPY THINK ITS GREAT!!! am i like the only one who thinks mnff is deserted these days? lol anyway thanks im happy u like it!!! XOXO

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 11/19/06 1:24
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Your other poem rocks but i have to say this one is the shizz and it is totally awesome and i like it better than the other one. nice bio, by the way.

Author's Response: SEE PEOPLE! this is the example of a GOOD REVIEWER!!! hehe..thanks anyway u speak just like my best friend..thanks for all the positive feedback and im gonna go respond to ur other review!! XOXO

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/02/06 19:41
Chapter: Ginny's Story

That was an awesome poem. It sounds just like Ginny. So IC. Ten stars!!!

Author's Response: thanks! i reckon that's u who reviwed my other one? im gonna go respond! im review crazyyyy!!! :-)..thanks anyway and im happy u think its ginny cuz u know hp characters DONT equal poetry ^_^..THANKS and ill go read any works u might have up!

Author's Response: wow lol that WASN'T u..ill still read any works u might have!

Reviewer: Wise Owl
Date: 10/30/06 17:07
Chapter: Ginny's Story

I'm submitting another review for this poem dare everyone else have all the fun!!!!!!! Okey dokey I'm off to read the new poem, oh and HAPPY MUGGLENET ANNIVERSARY MISS SARAH!!! Hugs...kisses...general pandamoneum. AHEM! Right, time to behave ourselves once more ;)

Author's Response: *grins* then i suppose the second review on my story is from you :-)...yay pandemonium!!! *hugs and kisses :-)*

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 10/28/06 17:33
Chapter: Ginny's Story

awww...sarah i read your bio...I still haven't made a story i tried 3 times though but it just never made it through...oh and you know my trademark "au revoir" haha...oh and i celebrated eid on monday ha so much fun!!! the reason don't come online anymore is my stupid compurter broke... im using joshua's now hehe...blah

Author's Response: sat hi to him for me :-)...i do hope u keep trying Heather i know u can do it! i celebrated it on tuesday.....thanks for FINALLY reading it! i hope u like the title to the new poem and i feel like killing the mods for taking so long! i submitted it like 5 days ago!

Author's Response: wow i just realized how unspecific i was..i kept using 'it' grammar teacher would probably cry if he read but u know what i meant...

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 10/27/06 10:55
Chapter: Ginny's Story

oh yeah happy eid!!!

Author's Response: HAPPY EID TO U AS WELL!...did u celebrate it on monday or tuesday? i celebrated it on so, so proud of you heather, im swelling with pride that u fasted all u could and i hope that u got a great present for it!

Author's Response: HAPPY EID TO U AS WELL!...did u celebrate it on monday or tuesday? i celebrated it on so, so proud of you heather, im swelling with pride that u fasted all u could and i hope that u got a great present for it!

Author's Response: wow i didnt know authors could make double-posts....awww and i also made my whole review page in bold! crud....

Reviewer: Hermione499
Date: 10/27/06 10:51
Chapter: Ginny's Story

awww im a little late i feel bad happy 1st year anviversity though!!!!!!!!!!!!! : ) ha i been here 1 year AND 5 months lol...well how are you??

Author's Response: w000t hey Heather! why haven't u been online! lol well u know, im the newbie! now cumon, chek my bio u guys have been askin for my new poem and the title of it is in my bio right now!!! ...anyway, im really was good today for me howzit treating u? lol i started french so ill say school is tres bien! ca va, Heather? :-P

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 10/25/06 6:14
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Wow, you've been on a whole year? I must treat you with respect! *salutes, bows, dances disco*

Author's Response: wooot *does the hustle*...thanks! i updated my bio for the occasion! check it out and ull find a surprise!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 10/24/06 18:11
Chapter: Ginny's Story

Ok, now I'm taking up room on YOUR review page *sorry!* but I noticed that you joined MNFF exactly a year ago, tomorrow. Happy b-day/ anniversary, as I'm not sure which term fits best... also, you have 2 fangirls named Juli... I see the makings of another club.... still a 10, Sarah! you rock!

Author's Response: *grinns*..i JUST signed on to update my bio saying i was here a whole year! NO WAY I WANT MORE REVIEWS i dont care if they arent related to the story its ust great to get them :-D...i could use another club...but YOU make up the'll probably be corny if i do it....and, Juli (s)....i might just have that second poem in the que....i just might ;-)...

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