That is touching! Yay to Neville, for not giving up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've always seen Neville as persistent and courageous--he just needs to realize it! =)
This is Neville, right? What's fin? Anyway, this is very poetic-sounding, but I rather like it. I thought I'd try your other story after enjoying the excellent Polkiss one, so here I am!
Author's Response: Neville it is. 'Fin' means 'the end' in some language or another...I'm glad you liked it--the poetic quality was a style challenge for me =)
As soon as you mentioned herbs, I knew who and what you were talking about. You have a gift and it would be a shame if you never tied to publish anything that was entirely your own.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I was trying to drop a few clues here and there--glad you picked up on that. I do hope to publish something someday--thanks for the encouragement!
Wow! This was amazing!!! I honestly didnt know that it was about *him* until nearer to the end... this was great!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping to keep kind of an air of mystery, but still make it obvious by the end--glad it was!
This was... incredible. Beautifully done. I'm so glad that you don't directly say the names in the story. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wanted to let the reader do the inferring on this one =)