Reviewer: atkarid
Date: 10/13/06 14:21
Chapter: Anger Management

Ah! I LOVE the humor and sarcastic comments Lily has! I can't wait for the next chapter, hear more of your Lily, and see what James has planned for her next!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/12/06 14:28
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Hahaha! Brilliant start! I loved it! Especially this bit ... Waltzing is basically the most important thing in a relationship next to screwing.

I told you she was a dirty trollop. I really miss Hogwarts. I really, really do. No talk of waltzing or screwing there. Well, at least no talk of waltzing.


That made me laugh so hard! Anyway, it was a great start. Looking forward to chapter two!

Reviewer: HalfBloodPrincess7
Date: 10/12/06 12:02
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Ha! Great first chapter. It started off better than the "Lily" first chapter... and I didn't think that that was possible. The whole "anger management" business is taken to a new level; a greater level. You must really enjoy writing about that. I like how you add quotes that people say. I also adore the lists! The last story was pack-full of them, and I hope this one is two. Can't wait for chapter two to be validated. -Adriene

Author's Response: Trust me, I have plenty of ideas brewing for the next chapters. However, finding time to write them is a problem.

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 10/11/06 17:33
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Great! I loved the first story and can't wait for an update on this one!

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 10/10/06 17:00
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

YOU MUST UPDATE
sorry I never reviewed the other story, but I LOVED it and I'm so excited for this one. My friend and I were actually discussing it today during Science class xD

Reviewer: pheonixflame
Date: 10/09/06 22:04
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Once again, very nice!
I'm going to enjoy reading this fic. =]
Hope the moderators approve your next chappie soon!

Reviewer: KitKat517
Date: 10/09/06 19:43
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Sorry, but I disagree with Lily. After reading part one, I think she probably does need anger management. I saw chapter two is submitted and hope the mods approve it soon.
~KitKat


Author's Response: Haha. Yes, Lily's a little angry. But, it's all the more entertaining for me to write.

Reviewer: xLiFEerasedx
Date: 10/09/06 18:44
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Hahaha! Awesome voice, as always. :] I can actually visualize Lily as she's writing when I'm reading her diary entries.

Keep it up & update soon please! :)

Reviewer: SlYtHeRiNgUrL
Date: 10/09/06 17:53
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

ooooooooooooooooooo! i love it! wen r u going to update?

Reviewer: quiet_passion
Date: 10/09/06 17:41
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

I can't wait for more! Before this came I was going checking every day for it, I'm so happy!!! Keep it up :D

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 10/09/06 16:19
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

This is so good! I love it! UPdate soon!

Reviewer: Griffindorgirl05
Date: 10/09/06 10:49
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

lol cool chapter plz update soon i can't wait

Reviewer: meg123
Date: 10/09/06 5:56
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Yay!!! Finally, the chapter's up! It's just so hilarious! I really like your style for this story, it's great, honestly! It's funny and thoughtful at the same time. Keep up the great work! :):):)

Reviewer: novella07
Date: 10/08/06 21:56
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

update soon, plz it was great

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 10/08/06 20:25
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Wow! Great first chapter! Please update soon and keep up the great work, not only in this story but all of your stories.

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 10/08/06 20:14
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

lol how do u think of this stuff it so funny I hope u update soon *hint*

Reviewer: SiLvEr_DrAgOn
Date: 10/08/06 20:01
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

I really love te way u write ... its great and very realistic ... kind of reminds me of the way my head works lol ... great stuff...

~SiLvEr DrAgOn~

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 10/08/06 16:30
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

YES!!!!! It finally came! Maybe a little romantic tension this year...

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 10/08/06 16:30
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

YES! I was so happy when I saw that they had finally accepted this first chapter. So far so good, this story seems to have the same lovable and crazy Lily you created in the previous fic. I can't wait to see more of James chasing Lily and that was quite a declaration! Good job, I look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 10/08/06 16:18
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

oh boy, lily (and this story )is going to be funny and very good! i really like it already, please update SOON1 thansk amore, for lily reigns again!

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