Ah! I LOVE the humor and sarcastic comments Lily has! I can't wait for the next chapter, hear more of your Lily, and see what James has planned for her next!
Hahaha! Brilliant start! I loved it! Especially this bit ... Waltzing is basically the most important thing in a relationship next to screwing.”
I told you she was a dirty trollop. I really miss Hogwarts. I really, really do. No talk of waltzing or screwing there. Well, at least no talk of waltzing.
That made me laugh so hard! Anyway, it was a great start. Looking forward to chapter two!
Ha! Great first chapter. It started off better than the "Lily" first chapter... and I didn't think that that was possible. The whole "anger management" business is taken to a new level; a greater level. You must really enjoy writing about that. I like how you add quotes that people say. I also adore the lists! The last story was pack-full of them, and I hope this one is two. Can't wait for chapter two to be validated. -Adriene
Author's Response: Trust me, I have plenty of ideas brewing for the next chapters. However, finding time to write them is a problem.
Great! I loved the first story and can't wait for an update on this one!
YOU MUST UPDATE
sorry I never reviewed the other story, but I LOVED it and I'm so excited for this one. My friend and I were actually discussing it today during Science class xD
Once again, very nice!
I'm going to enjoy reading this fic. =]
Hope the moderators approve your next chappie soon!
Sorry, but I disagree with Lily. After reading part one, I think she probably does need anger management. I saw chapter two is submitted and hope the mods approve it soon.
Author's Response: Haha. Yes, Lily's a little angry. But, it's all the more entertaining for me to write.
Hahaha! Awesome voice, as always. :] I can actually visualize Lily as she's writing when I'm reading her diary entries.
Keep it up & update soon please! :)
ooooooooooooooooooo! i love it! wen r u going to update?
I can't wait for more! Before this came I was going checking every day for it, I'm so happy!!! Keep it up :D
This is so good! I love it! UPdate soon!
lol cool chapter plz update soon i can't wait
Yay!!! Finally, the chapter's up! It's just so hilarious! I really like your style for this story, it's great, honestly! It's funny and thoughtful at the same time. Keep up the great work! :):):)
update soon, plz it was great
Wow! Great first chapter! Please update soon and keep up the great work, not only in this story but all of your stories.
lol how do u think of this stuff it so funny I hope u update soon *hint*
I really love te way u write ... its great and very realistic ... kind of reminds me of the way my head works lol ... great stuff...
YES!!!!! It finally came! Maybe a little romantic tension this year...
YES! I was so happy when I saw that they had finally accepted this first chapter. So far so good, this story seems to have the same lovable and crazy Lily you created in the previous fic. I can't wait to see more of James chasing Lily and that was quite a declaration! Good job, I look forward to reading more.
oh boy, lily (and this story )is going to be funny and very good! i really like it already, please update SOON1 thansk amore, for lily reigns again!