Reviewer: Chill
Date: 11/15/06 21:03
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

It's impossible to summon a snitch read Quidditch through the Ages... lol
Excellent chapter can't wait for them to validate the next one!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/15/06 21:03
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Oh, and I do beleive this is the first time I've managed to be the first reviewer!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/15/06 21:00
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Yay! Another chapter.

This is addictive o.o Just waiting for it to be validated...

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/14/06 23:13
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

James probably went to catch the snith. Could've summoned it...Hm.

Anyway, please update! I know it's hard to come up with new ideas (or at least for me) and put them into writing like you want (me again, at least).

Author's Response: Yes, well, our James Potter likes to do things the difficult way. Summoning the snitch would've been too easy.

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 11/13/06 19:20
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Anger management! OMG! I love it!

Also, just a bit of canon info. James was a Chaser. Sorry about it!

OMG! I still love the fic!


Author's Response: ... I said he was a Chaser. o_O

Reviewer: HogwartsXC
Date: 11/13/06 18:49
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

I like how Lily's more calm now, but still has those halarious scenarios going through her head. I do feel kind of bad for James though. I guess it's the good ol' what comes around goes around thing.

Reviewer: thepatronus_n_thecharm
Date: 11/12/06 17:09
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

It's kinda odd for Lily to be crying over a Snitch flying away...........but otherwise...I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!! KEEP 'EM COMIN, KEEP 'EM COMIN!

Author's Response: She didn't cry. She just felt like crying. Because she knew she was somehow going to get blamed for something James did.

Reviewer: novella07
Date: 11/11/06 22:07
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

cant wait 2 read more

Reviewer: AILily
Date: 11/11/06 14:42
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

I wonder how she kicked the anger.... Anyway James is such a jerk off in this! Making a girl cry just crosses the line. I woulda clocked him if he kept to doing that to me! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: quiet_passion
Date: 11/08/06 16:56
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

That was really good. You painted a picture in my mind - wait, that sounds extremely corny. it was great!

Reviewer: Dragon_Warrior
Date: 11/08/06 16:22
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Love it! The first was good, but this one's better! Keep writing!!! ^_0

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 11/08/06 16:19
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

hmm.....i thought james was the seeker. is he going to fire astrid or something later on?

Author's Response: I've done James as both a Seeker and Chaser, but according to JKR canon, not the movie, he was a Chaser. It's way too controversial for my liking, but whatever. I thought I'd change it up. And, about Astrid, I'm not sure. I haven't written past chapter four due to time constraints.

Reviewer: darkangelx02
Date: 11/08/06 15:23
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

yay!!! you finally updated!!! A good chapter!!! 10/10!!

Reviewer: California
Date: 11/08/06 14:16
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

lol i love how holly is like a psychologist i this chapter. plz update sooner!

Reviewer: nuw255
Date: 11/08/06 13:54
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Just so you know, you crack me up. Seriously, I was actually laughing out loud as I read this story (and that doesn't happen all too often). Keep up the good work, and update soon!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 11/08/06 10:14
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Heh heh. This is great. I loved Holly being all clipboard-and-fake-glasses, it was classic. And also "I went and consoled the poor girl, handing her tissues and telling her about the time I saw Potter snogging a skrewt. I never actually saw Potter snogging a skrewt before, but well, I had a dream about it once and that must count for something." and "Little first years are going to whisper behind my back, sprouting off that I’m ‘that girl who stole the Snitch because she’s mad’." I don't even know why I find that one so funny ... (Ah, inexplicable humor wins again). Anyway, keep it up because its awesome!

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 11/07/06 22:14
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Yay! You updated! ::does dance:: Nice chapter. Really liked reading this one. :) Update soon!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/07/06 22:11
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

I just finished reading it.

God, I don't know where you make these up, but they're hilarious. Just in case I haven't mentioned...*shifty eyes*

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 11/07/06 22:05
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

WOW! I love your story! You have given an amazing voice and attitude to your characters. They have wonderful quirks that make the series so interesting! This is defidently one opf my favorite fanfics!!!!!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/07/06 21:54
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

YAY! Third reviewer!

Anything, this part:

Right now, she’s sitting at an armchair with these thick black glasses (no lenses, mind you, since she doesn’t actually need glasses) and her clip board and is scribbling away. She’s been looking at poor Peter Pettigrew for the past two hours and the boy has just about wet himself with anxiety.

It's perfect!

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