Reviewer: sister
Date: 11/25/06 20:11
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

awesome- beautifully, comically constructed language

Reviewer: hailme_imcaesar89
Date: 11/24/06 19:33
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

I can't stop laughing! I Can't wait for the next chapter. I really love the whole sarcastic and unhappy outlook of Lily's life. It reminds me of my sister somewhat. Lol. Your writting is great.

Reviewer: hailme_imcaesar89
Date: 11/24/06 18:51
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

I absolutely love your story! It is so hilarious and really well written.

Reviewer: xLiFEerasedx
Date: 11/23/06 18:06
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Hahaha, another great chapter.

Hmm, will the truth ever be known about the snitch theft?

Looking forward to the resolving of that issue. xD

Author's Response: .. you mean for the readers? Because James took it. But, other than that, no. Madam Hooch favors James too much to suspect that he took it. And Lily's no tattle tale XD

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/23/06 9:01
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch


Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 11/23/06 3:49
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

cool chapter...
update soon

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/22/06 21:25
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch


Just finishes reading it. I never liked Madam Hooch. She creeped me out. Same with Olivander.

But I love her grandmother.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/22/06 20:53
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch


Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: California
Date: 11/22/06 15:05
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

i love lilys sarcastic comments all the time. this is one of my fav chaters. UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: Chill
Date: 11/22/06 10:03
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch



Reviewer: Chill
Date: 11/21/06 21:06
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Yeah, like every story is falling way behind... one of the only thing that is getting on my nerves about the site...


Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/21/06 20:43
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

XD Lily would have a mental breakdown XD

And I hope you don't lose interest. I mean, this is the best diary story I've ever read!

And about the validating- I think it's happening to every story. Or not, but some of my favourite authors (inclusing yourself) have said that their stories have been in a queue for some time.

Author's Response: Hey, if you guys promise to be good reviewers, I can give you the link to the story on another site :)

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/20/06 21:14
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Oh, awsome. I mean, obvious, but I really didn't think about anybody looking for a snitch. Which is stupid, really, considering the title. And the previous chapter.

Well, good luck getting it varified. I hope it doesn't take too long, because I'm sick of waiting. Waiting usually leads me to go onto, which is really not exacly eduational. You see things that you really don't want to. Usually includes Paris Hilton. O.O

Anyway, just another question- are you going to write a story for every year until 7th year? I mean, you started in fourth year, and are now on 5th year, which kind of speaks for itself, but are you planning to just stop after you finish this? Just asking because you said you've been on a break, so...

Author's Response: The plan is to write a sixth & seventh year, as well. Only four stories. I have some ideas for each year, so, if I happen to still be interested in fanfiction come that time, I'll hopefully be writing two more sequels, as well. And, about the snitch, there are some people rather obsessed with Quidditch who are feeling the loss. So, in their eyes, the snitch is important.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/19/06 23:14
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Tell me about it. But, good news! I finally wrote chapter five after a four month [approximately] hiatus. XD



So, since they haven't varified (or whatever it's called) the fourth chapter, can you give any hints as to what may happen? Just small ones...

I'm guessing here that the answer will be no, but I can dream, can't I?

Author's Response: The snitch ... is "missing". And a few students are called in regarding its whereabouts. That's all I can really give you.

Reviewer: sister
Date: 11/19/06 22:45
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

definitely one of the best lily/james fics!!!! i lvoe eerything about it- it isn't too sappy, it has just enough candid detail and complex sentence structure... plus, of course, it is very amusing, very lighthearted. Love love love!!

Author's Response: It's just sort of ironic that I have two more stories until they actually start dating and yet, it's a Lily/James fic. XD

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/19/06 15:29
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Uh, if anyone is reading this, then how long does it usually take for a chapter to be varified?

This has been on a wait for ages.

Author's Response: Tell me about it. But, good news! I finally wrote chapter five after a four month [approximately] hiatus. XD

Reviewer: jandl
Date: 11/17/06 21:38
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

can't wait for next chap!

Reviewer: kulemba
Date: 11/16/06 19:54
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Let me tell you, I've been falling out of my seat each time I see that a chapter is in waiting! My sister runs to see what the loud thump is. Fanfictions seem to make me jittery.

Reviewer: Chill
Date: 11/16/06 14:19
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

*stops clicking REFRESH button...* gosh darnit you darn moderators she won't have done anything wrong validate it already! *goes back to clicking REFRESH button* I- Want- to- see- story

Yes I know I'm crazy lol

Author's Response: Might want to be a bit more patient as I've been on a writing hiatus since July.

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 11/15/06 22:17
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

...Damn you and your wonderful writing abilities. I've been sitting here waiting for the story to be validated, even though I know my dad will find out about the...erm, excessive time I've been spending on the computer.

Oh, and I've said this before, but: I do have a life. I just happen to love and enjoy fanfiction in a third of my spare time.

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