Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/06/07 0:03
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Okay, I msut say that after readnig your first story and then this one, I am really impressed. I love how Lily is unaffected by James completely (for the most part) and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Oh, her anger isn't unaffected by James. XD And, soon enough, she won't be quite as immune to his charm. Probably more next story than this one.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 01/05/07 9:18
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Oh wow! James is such a prat. poor Lily. You write this wonderfully you know. And I just posted my first story on here and someone reviewed telling me it was written like this story. That was such a great compliment to me. Wonderful job and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: It's a fun side of Lily to write :) Good luck with your story.

Reviewer: Green Eyes
Date: 12/30/06 21:57
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

AMAZING =)

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 12/30/06 17:29
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

hahaha, I'm still laughing! That was great! Wonderful writing and excellent plot as usual. Don't mean to rush you, but I can't wait for more! I'm putting this story at the top of my favorites list!!

Reviewer: Laurelian
Date: 12/30/06 5:24
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Ooh, I just adore this story!!! Update soon pleasy pleasy pleasy please!

Reviewer: Laurelian
Date: 12/30/06 4:38
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

Isn't James supposedly a Seeker? Like Harry? I recall this being mentioned in the books, sth to do with genetic talent passed on to him by his father. I'm not absolutely sure of this but I thought I'd ask anyway.

Author's Response: JKR has confirmed that he was a Chaser. The movies got it wrong. *shrug*

Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 12/30/06 4:17
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

go lily!!
great chapter...
love lily's and sirius' reaction....
keep updating!

Reviewer: stefi9
Date: 12/29/06 21:48
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

james you prat! to quote chandler:could he BE any dumber?

Reviewer: dragonwings
Date: 12/29/06 21:36
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Oh god, I almost died laughing. This is one of the best Marauder era stories I've read and I commend you for it!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 12/29/06 20:46
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Wow great chapter! It's hilarious! You are such a great writer!!!!1

Reviewer: California
Date: 12/29/06 18:16
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

i luved it!!! i was wondering if you were ever going to have lily have a boyfriend before 7th year...oh well UPDATE SOONER

Author's Response: Probably. I have something in mind right now for when we reach more mature elements of the story [probably in the next installment].

Reviewer: California
Date: 12/29/06 18:12
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

omg i absolutely loved this chapter plz update sooner!!

Reviewer: beautifulromantic
Date: 12/29/06 18:08
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Are you going to continue this until seventh year? Cuz otherwise we will want to know how he eventually wins her over. Though I think it was a good idea, they might have wanted to check up on what she actally likes from a guy. But maybe he should tell her exactly why he likes her.

Author's Response: It'll go until seventh year [if I get the time, that is]. And, as for James checking what Lily likes, he's sort of dim. He thinks that whatever he likes, Lily will like. He'll make progress eventually, trust me.

Reviewer: sister
Date: 12/29/06 15:49
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

LOVED it! just a tiny bit far-fetched with the getting onto the broom so fast and all.

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 12/27/06 16:53
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

i'm sure its a great chapter but i can't read it because of ACCESS DENIED!!!!! Dun Dun Dun. UGH! I'm so frusterated i was so excited when i saw you updated!!!! Oh well. (sigh)

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 12/23/06 12:41
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

oh man, what a great chapter! i loved this. you are an excellent writer with your own distinct style. there is nothing in this story that i dislike. this story is funny, and amazing, and i can't wait for more. i love love love this story so please update soon!

Reviewer: Chill
Date: 12/21/06 15:13
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

Amen... lol

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 12/21/06 1:42
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

This is a good chapter :D

Reviewer: Hex
Date: 12/09/06 7:47
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

Nice chapter....... Can't wait for the next one....I love the way you've characterized everybody in your story, esp. Lily....

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 11/25/06 21:28
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

I have been waiting for this story for FOREVER! i can't tell you how much this makes my day!!! It was exceptionally well written, as always.

And, I just wanted to comment that Lily's grandmother reminds me of Sirius's mother in her letters...

Author's Response: Haha. I never made that connection. But I can see where you might get that from. Sirius' mother and Lily's grandmother should have tea. If only Sirius' mom didn't hate muggles, might have been a match made in heaven.

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