Reviewer: J-Holly
Date: 01/20/13 5:12
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

I think this is the best of all your works. Please post the next chapter. I did the contact author thing, but I don't think you received it.

Reviewer: Ginnypotter2699
Date: 11/23/11 5:05
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

Holly? I've read Lily and James :their story of love so I thought lily would have Katy and Halle as her best friends(I like Katy )

Reviewer: oceanwolf1
Date: 11/22/11 22:37
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

More please!

Reviewer: Sirius-ly Marauder
Date: 04/10/11 16:20
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

It's been so long... please finish it, I simply LOVE ur work (especially potter's charm) BTW when does the prequil to that come out? I don't see it anywhere...

Author's Response: the prequel's name is "lily."

Reviewer: Sirius-ly Marauder
Date: 04/10/11 15:40
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

i love this chapter!

Reviewer: Sirius-ly Marauder
Date: 04/09/11 21:02
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

do you have to have read "lily" to get the rest of this story???

Reviewer: harry potter lovee
Date: 01/02/11 11:29
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

this is great! it's REALLY hilarious! i cant wait until the next chapter comes up!

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 08/04/10 20:05
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

this is absolutely one of my favorite lily and james fanfictions ever!!!!!! please can you finish with this fanfiction???? please! it was very amusing to read.

Reviewer: Kaati
Date: 06/28/10 15:39
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

will you continue with this?

I hope you'll do. it's very good.

Reviewer: Kimya
Date: 07/29/09 20:56
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

Wow. You are REALLY funny! I've been reading your work since THIRD GRADE, and it never gets old for me. I just wish you'd do SOMETHING and update, because it's been about three to four years since you've updated! But this chapter was exceptionally funny! Bye!

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 02/20/09 16:04
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety


Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 10/02/08 14:46
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

welllll its been three years so i doubt u writing the last chapter...ill miss the Lily series with all my heart

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/27/08 10:46
Chapter: Being Forced To Face Fears And Failing

so so good

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/18/08 14:51
Chapter: Anger Management

very good, funny, well written, and descriptive. How was that fora revierw?

Reviewer: tonks654
Date: 09/17/08 14:47
Chapter: Return To Sanctity

very good...sorry its taking me so l ong to finish...ive been reading it in bits and pieces, but im getting there! i cant waitt o hear moree!

Reviewer: love_letters
Date: 07/27/08 20:30
Chapter: Case Of The Missing Snitch

i'ed kill her, if i were her i wouldint care if she's my best friend i'ed kill her and i'ed kill him too. yess there's some thing rong with me (maybe i need anger manig mint)

Reviewer: love_letters
Date: 07/27/08 19:50
Chapter: Quidditch Qualms

one mastasack(I’ll admit he’s a fairly good Chaser.) james isint a chaser he's a seeker. besids that it's rilly a good book

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 07/25/08 12:07
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is soooooo hysterical!!!! I haven't stopped laughing since I started reading it!

Reviewer: lilyflower721
Date: 07/22/08 19:24
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

you've GOT to finish this story. this is one of my favorite stories, it needs an ending

Reviewer: dobbyXkreacher
Date: 07/01/08 14:44
Chapter: Lack Of Subtlety

i really think you should update this story soon!!! I always check back for an update but their never is one :( this is one of my favourite Lily stories

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