Reviewer: PinkMonkey
Date: 10/01/06 9:17
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

very moving. i never usually put reviews but i had to express that. truly inspiring... go neville!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 10/01/06 7:57
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

Wow!! This was really good!

Reviewer: sakata_sarah
Date: 10/01/06 2:44
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

Wow that's incredible! I've never read one dedicated to Neville before but that was great. He truly is a hero in his own way

Reviewer: PheonixFlames
Date: 10/01/06 0:57
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

That is so sweet! I love it!

Reviewer: Sadey_Asawood
Date: 10/01/06 0:22
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

This was interesting...I've never seen a fic written this way before. I love the style, but I think it needs some revisions, I don't know, it seems kind of rushed. You have a great plot and style, so use that and make it longer, more descriptive, with more vivid words. I hope to read more of your writing, too.

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