Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 07/20/08 18:06
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

oooooooh! I loved that! Very powerful!

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 07/20/08 18:05
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

oooooooh! I loved that! Very powerful!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/05/08 20:00
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

Wonderful, inspiring, beautiful, hopeful. A hero indeed.

Reviewer: Danielle_Malfoy
Date: 03/01/08 14:44
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

I think this is perfect.

Dont change it unless you want to

Reviewer: Danielle_Malfoy
Date: 03/01/08 14:43
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

Awww. I cried so hard. Your words just make me cry. Every one of your stories is powerful

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 10/27/07 12:23
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

This is very well written and shows a point of view that many would not notice, nor would the see the heroism behind these simple things! thanks for pointing out that sometimes it is the courage to step up and do the small things that can win wars!

Reviewer: xxBleedingHeartxx
Date: 10/26/07 9:02
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

that was amazing. The plot could have really sucked, but you made it into something. The definition thing is brilliant. And it was the last one that made the piece complete.

Reviewer: tha_looney_one
Date: 08/27/07 9:08
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

this was great, you really have a unique veiw on stuff. i love your depiction of neville and your format. the dictionary idea is a good one- i might try something similar myself.

Reviewer: Hel
Date: 06/09/07 23:38
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

ohhh! Loved it. It's so - simple and perfect. Neville is such a hero, even if he doesnt realise it. So thank you for showing us it!

Reviewer: black_retribution
Date: 03/07/07 16:33
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

this is great. i like the idea of the letters and all the hope they bring. and i really like the idea of Neville saving the world. :)

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/21/06 19:29
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

I mean hopeless *is the Typo Queen*

Reviewer: HPwizzzard
Date: 12/21/06 19:28
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

Nice! I like it when Neville is portrayed as, well, anything other than a opeess lump.

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 10/22/06 21:52
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

i really really like this story, and it makes me want to write letters too. this has touched me deeply, so thank you very much for bringing it out into the world.

Reviewer: Julian
Date: 10/10/06 20:20
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

that was wonderful!!! really touching

Reviewer: Julian
Date: 10/10/06 20:19
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

that was wonderful!!! really touching

Reviewer: MithrilQuill
Date: 10/02/06 19:40
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

*is shedding tears*...

Seriously, you always manage to get a reaction out of me with your fics whether it's moving me to tears or making me smile or anything...whther you see it or not...*grin*...

But that's only because people like you never really see what they do for everyone.

As usual, I really can't describe just how much I liked this, but I'll try to point out some of the things that just stuck out at me. I loved Neville's characterization, of course, and I really enjoyed all the little mentions of other characters...I think Terry's Death was the point where I started crying...

The night after Terry Boot is murdered, the sky glows with the combined light of dozens of candles, flickering from windowsills and doorsteps.

The candles burn every night thereafter, so brightly that they leave no shadows for Dementors and Death Eaters to hide in.

That was just so simply moving...

I also really liked the following sections:

What makes it worse is the fact that it's so subtle that no-one seems to notice that the world has been bled dry of life and glory and little things like laughter or joy. It's stagnant. The world is waiting for the checkmate.

That was just so chillingly real, you know...


They may take Hogwarts, Diagon Alley, and Hogsmeade, but they can't take your spirit, your hands, and your words.

*sigh*...well, if I keep going I will quote the entire fic so I'll just mention that I really enjoyed the description of Neville in the follwoing quotes:

But when Susan Bones writes her letters, there's stains on the parchment because she's making her supper at the same time. Terry Boot and Theodore Nott start a long-distance chess match. McGonagall still sends you biscuits, and Luna sometimes asks if you wouldn't mind looking over her Herbology papers.


Up at all hours, responding as letters come in, sending off seeds and recipes and articles torn out of magazines.

Because these little things coupled with the fact that they're writing letters just made me think of fanfic writers and how sometimes we've made online friends that we enjoy talking to so much and really help out whatever way we can etc. (of course there's the irritating sides of the fandom, but the message of hope in the fic makes me try to look at the brighter side)

And, in conclusion, you managed to blow me away and you really inspired with this fic. I loved everything from the structure with the definitions to the stains on Hannah's was just moving...*huggles*...please keep writing more great fics, Seren!

*goes to re-read some of the older ones*

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 10/01/06 23:46
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

To quote the great Dumbledore: "To Mr Neville Lonbottom, I award ten points." Neville is awesome. =D

Reviewer: ginevra715
Date: 10/01/06 14:06
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

What a unique view on fighting the war...I really liked that. Inspiring and well-written. All of the definitions were a nice touch.

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 10/01/06 12:16
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

This is really great. Once again, you think of something no one else has thought of, Seren, and pull it off brilliantly. The definitions were just perfect. The nifty way the entire one-shot was addressing Neville was interesting, but it didn't really work for me. *shrugs* Otherwise I have no objections. I love the "revolution" idea; it made me get warm fuzzies inside. ;) Anyway, I'm glad to see something new by you gracing MNFF. =)

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 10/01/06 11:48
Chapter: Definition//Revolution

This is such a perfect idea! I don't know how you thought of it. But I love it.

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