Hogsmead is a wizarding village not a city. But otherwise this one of the most interesting fics I've red in a while!
This is very good but as McGonagall is a woman, that would make her a Headmistress not a master ; )
I usually don't like non-canon post-hogwarts stuff, but this is written extremely well, not to mention the plot line definitely draws you in!
There's constantly this lump in my throat as I read this because it's really tragic. I'm glad JK's Harry didn't leave like this, it would have been unbearable.
All the same, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Wow! Powerful storyline - looking forward to more
This is truely a well written and well thought out story. I have really enjoyed reading your view point of this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And I look forward to the reactions of Harry's friends when they find out the truth. I exspecially can't wait to see what Harry does to Draco Malfoy. Just the anticipation alone is nerve racking. Please continue to update this story on a regular basis. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Wow. Some heavy stuff in there. This story is very well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
this is a really good story, when are we going to find out who the mother is?
yeah, I'm still reading it. I've been regularly checking for updates and I almost thought you had given up the story. I think your story is really good: the plot is well contructed and has the right dose of mistery and the characters are well constructed as well. Can't wait for your next update. Hope I won't have to wait this long. Bon courage
that was an awesome chapter!! i loved it! it was like a suspense novel! i cant wait for the next chapter!!
i wonder who that woman and baby are. i really have no clue.
lol! they do sound like teenagers!! aw! the good old days... lol
ron has a very cool job! and i really like this story so far!
hermione's the DADA teacher! awesome! i never would have thought of her!!
draco?! of all people! i wonder why he wants harry though. and i still cant figure out if alex is adopted or really harry's son.
thats so sad!! i have tears in my eyes now. *sniff*
there's so many questions i have. but i bet they'll be answered.
Ah, what a great mystery!
I just read your entire story, and I love it :)
The only things that confuse me are the disguise, portkey, (wouldn't someone notice if his body was gone?) and Alex's mother. Although I know that the last one is a mystery is purposely there.
Really great story,
-Katie.
cool i liked it
when are you going to update?
I love it! Please update as soon as possible!
