Reviews For Gone Too Far
Reviewer: poltergeist07
Date: 10/21/06 19:51
Chapter: The Boggart

The five ways Sirius is like a dog: (am I too late for that cookie?)
1.) "Sirius smiled wickedly, and then let loose a short, bark-like laugh."
2.) "Instantly, a hissing, spitting cat the size of a small car emerged from the suitcase. Peter squeaked; behind him, Remus and James were restraining a growling Sirius."
3.) "The cat shrunk in size, its yowls getting steadily more high-pitched as it shrunk. Finally, it ended up the size of a matchbox, and its cries were inaudible (although Sirius kept wincing);"
4.) "The boggart immediately changed into a bright yellow fire hydrant, complete with large, shark-like teeth, bloodshot eyes, and a very deep growl." (dog afraid of biting hydrant, nicee!)
5.) Sirius shook himself out like a dog

Author's Response: good job! *pats on head and gives cookies* :)

Reviewer: California
Date: 10/15/06 17:17
Chapter: Arachnids and Animosity

aww i feel so sorry for James!!

Reviewer: California
Date: 10/15/06 17:14
Chapter: The Boggart

Good beginning!! um Sirius acts like a dog when he growled??

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/15/06 17:05
Chapter: Arachnids and Animosity


Reviewer: SlYtHeRiNgUrL
Date: 10/15/06 16:06
Chapter: Arachnids and Animosity

Awww! This chapter made me want to cry

Reviewer: Teary Loser
Date: 10/13/06 5:13
Chapter: Arachnids and Animosity

I love it! Update soon! Please!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Chapter 2... I'm hoping that Chapter 1 will be validated soon, so cross your fingers!

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 10/10/06 5:36
Chapter: Arachnids and Animosity

Oh This was good!

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