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Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 0:42 · For: Chapter 1
Oh, Ginny...

Brava - you fit her character perfectly. I see so many that make her out to be so... Thick, and fluffy. If that makes any sense. But this is WONDERFUL.


This part was my favorite :

What happened to my fairytale, the happily ever after?
I prayed for you to come back home.
Oh father, I have lost all faith,
My prince shall not return.
Iíll just stay here with the memories,
Iím just another broken promise.



Bravissima!


~Juli

Author's Response: hey sorry its taken me soooooo long to reply, my internet has been down. thanks for the review and im glad you liked my poem, personally i didnt think it was very good, it was just something to do during my time off school. thanks again it means alot to me! ~Chloe


Name: EtherealElation (Signed) · Date: 10/13/06 0:41 · For: Chapter 1
Oh, Ginny...

Brava - you fit her character perfectly. I see so many that make her out to be so... Thick, and fluffy. If that makes any sense. But this is WONDERFUL.


This part was my favorite :

What happened to my fairytale, the happily ever after?
I prayed for you to come back home.
Oh father, I have lost all faith,
My prince shall not return.
Iíll just stay here with the memories,
Iím just another broken promise.



Bravissima!


~Juli


Name: Her_mi_o_ne 16 (Anonymous) · Date: 09/30/06 0:48 · For: Chapter 1
very very very very very good.
I commend you. "What happened to my fairytale, the happily ever after? . . . I'm just another broken promise."
Wow.
That's amazing.


Author's Response: hey sorry its taken me and age and a half to reply, iv been really busy and my internet went down a while ago. Thanks for the review i really apprieciate it as i didn't think my poem was any good, and its great to hear that people liked it. Thanks again ~Chloe


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