Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/14/06 23:50
Chapter: The First Day of My Life

Oh! It's so sad to think that Sirius and Remus actually suspected each other. They really did. At least in this fic it's happier.

Author's Response: You know, ideally, it would be nice to think/know that they didn't. But they did. And I really think that, as sad as it is, that adds such a nice layer to the relationship,a certain hardship, and that they're better for it for overcoming it.

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 10/29/06 4:16
Chapter: The First Day of My Life

Ohhh I hope they manage to work it out!

I loved dome of your descriptions, like:

'weaving their intricate dance around one another in their attempts to get dressed'

'the movement of his hand through the air weighted down, as though he is trying to swim through water'

and

'they have already separated their bodies from one another and the tangle of sleep'

Really lovely!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Iridescent_Raven
Date: 10/07/06 9:53
Chapter: The First Day of My Life

Aw. That was so cute. I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: xginny_weasleyx
Date: 10/06/06 14:03
Chapter: The First Day of My Life

that was so beautiful it was amazing. I don't general read wolfstar but that was unbelieveable. It was just...Wow. The emotion displayed through your writting is so shockingly powerful yet subtle at the same time. Just...WOW.

Author's Response: Lovely. Always glad to steer readers towards converting to the Wolfstar ship. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

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