Reviewer: artsy_aud_girl
Date: 07/01/08 1:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Please write more. This is really good and I think its very unique that you came up with your own ending for the series. =) I know that i don't have as brilliant mind to create an ending or write a story to continue..

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord_Fienne
Date: 07/17/07 20:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

What sexual situations are you talking about?

Reviewer: radcliffe4eva
Date: 01/15/07 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really interesting, please update.

Reviewer: qwerty83
Date: 12/12/06 8:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my, how sad! Oh poor Hermione.

The bit about George was so sad. Poor him. I think you meant 'role' instead of 'roll' there.

I loved this bit:

The older woman took her cue and said nothing about the name. No matter how many years would pass, some things were still unspeakable, and Ron Weasley’s death at the hand of Bellatrix Lestrange was one of them.

It must be so difficult for Hermione to be constantly reminded of him.

That last sentence was so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: appalachiangirl1
Date: 12/10/06 23:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it!!!!

Reviewer: kendrasnapeobsessed
Date: 10/24/06 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great beginning, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: DA_twins
Date: 10/22/06 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

uhhhh.... where's the snape part???

Reviewer: OrangeRainbows
Date: 10/22/06 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a really good story,also very sad. Keep writing!

Reviewer: pygmypuff_girl
Date: 10/06/06 3:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good first chapter, lots of interesting background on various characters, looking foward to Severus making an apperance!

Author's Response: I'm afraid you're going to have to wait a few more chapters... sorry! :)

Reviewer: pygmypuff_girl
Date: 10/06/06 3:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good first chapter, lots of interesting background on various characters, looking foward to Severus making an apperance!

Reviewer: woomama
Date: 10/03/06 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like your story, it has promise. I did notice some punctuation errors that slipped by your beta. Might want to have it looked at again. I look forward to chapter two.

Reviewer: Triwizard
Date: 10/03/06 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW! that's really good!

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