Reviews For Eternal Souls
Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 07/21/08 11:54
Chapter: Epilogue

That was a good story, befitting of a Nation. I like how Draco has a true friend, and not just his cronies Crabbe and Goyle. So, where did you get the name Nation anyways?

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 07/21/08 11:33
Chapter: Chapter One

Ooooh, good chapter, i'll keep reading. The only reason i looked at it in the first place was because of the girl's name. We share the same last name. Didn't know it was common enough for someone to use in a fanfic. Now back to reading the rest of the story.

Reviewer: elderbreath
Date: 03/03/05 5:44
Chapter: Chapter Four

This (chap 4) I think is one of your best chapters. Its fluid and detailed the conversation is good and sounds believable. The way you portrayed Harry through Anilla's Draco influenced eyes which the reader thinks of as innaccurate was excellent. You introduce and develop mystery to (presuamably) be explored later Good stuff

Author's Response: Oo, thank you!! I'm glad you like it, and i hope you like the way i've written the rest of it. Thank you so much for your encouraging review!!

Reviewer: Fawkes17
Date: 02/20/05 18:16
Chapter: Chapter One

Aww ... It's one of those sad, cliffhangerish summing everything up in a chapter kind of stories. I love it. It was great! I do hope you consider (some time in the future) writing a sequil. It would be awesome. I know how time-consuming it could be. It's your choice, but I must side with a few other of your fans when I say "you should!". Awesome work!

Author's Response: Wow, it feels weird when you say "fans". I'll try to write more but i don't have much time now that school's back on and i'm trying to continue with Secrets Within. Thank you for your review though!!!

Reviewer: Phoenixs Ashes
Date: 02/18/05 10:06
Chapter: Chapter One

Its sad....but really good! Please write a sequel in which the Hungarian Horntail is reborn as an eternal soul...and say what happens to Draco...and Harry!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!! If i have time i'll write more, but i don't think it will be very soon. Maybe, sometime next holidays when i have all day to laze around, or type on the laptop ...

Reviewer: ReeMarie LeBeau
Date: 02/04/05 21:19
Chapter: Epilogue

Gotta love it...gotta love it. Hope it really doesn't end here. ^_~ Great story ^_^

Author's Response: I won't have much time to write now that school is back, so the story has to end here. I hope you keep reading my other fanfics.

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 01/26/05 8:17
Chapter: Chapter Ten

That was a great story! Would you consider writing a sequel to this story? I am curious to know what happens later and I also hope Draco (the human one) will still be a part of it.

Author's Response: I've posted an Epilouge and that is in queue to be accepted (or rejected). That should explain what happens directly after the main story and a bit after.

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 01/25/05 19:12
Chapter: Chapter Ten

I liked it alot. very interesting view of Draco, but how did he know that the answers she needed were in romania if he didn't know her powers?

Author's Response: He could sense something in her, and he obvious love of dragons led him to believe that she had something to do with dragons because 1) she wasn't magical, but 2) he knew there was something there. I hope that answers your question.

Reviewer: IDoAppearToBeAlicia
Date: 01/07/05 4:13
Chapter: Chapter Ten

Amy this is great, i dont really known why everyone is complaining about this being out of character for Draco and Narcissa, we only know how they are on the outside. I mean no one is born evil, they can only become that way by the way their lives turn out and by the way Dracos father treats him, maybe that’s the reason he is so nasty at school, he seems just to be a troubled kid. I really like the ending it keeps you hanging and if you want to write a sequel that option is still open, Great work Amy!

Author's Response: Ok, at the moment i'm trying to write an epilouge so i will try and use that to explain what happened after all that Anilla and Draco had been through. But it could take a while still.

Reviewer: Sakula
Date: 01/04/05 17:44
Chapter: Chapter Ten

It's a good story, though I am curious to why Narcissa would put up with a Muggle.....Does Lucius know about her?

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and your review. After spending time with Anilla, Narcissa began to see that there was more to her than just been a Mugge (as Draco knows also) and just as if Draco's case, Lucius doesn't approve of Muggles and magic ppl being friends, so Narcissa doesn't tell him about Draco's friendship with her. Also, Narcissa is a little more understanding and accepting than Lucius is about Muggles. (well, that's what i think, anyway)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/03/05 9:04
Chapter: Chapter Ten

Is this really the end?

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/03/05 9:00
Chapter: Chapter Nine

Just to nitpick. Draco bribes? the guard at the dragon preserve but doesn't pay Madame Rosmerta?

Author's Response: He doesn't bribe the guard at the preserve, he just pays her for entering, as it proably costs a lot to keep so many dragons. sorry if it wasn't clear. thanks for your review!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/03/05 8:54
Chapter: Chapter Seven

nice tantalizing tidbits.

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/03/05 8:47
Chapter: Chapter Five

good questions raised by Draco. Now the important one-when will they get answered?

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 01/03/05 8:42
Chapter: Chapter Four

This definitely isn't canon Draco or even canon Narcissa. Neither of them would give muggles the time of day. Nonetheless there seems to be a bit of a mystery. So for your story I will accept Draco as is.

Reviewer: Jemma
Date: 01/02/05 22:39
Chapter: Chapter Ten

Finished! That was pretty good Amy, it was quite a sweet ending, and did make the start make more sense. (if that makes sense=)) Im a bit confused as to what her "destiny" may involve-perhaps a sequal??

Author's Response: Thanks for all your review and "constructive critisism". if other people are just as if-fy about the ending i may add another chapter as the epilouge. and about dubbledore and snape not looking for draco; he's only not been at school for a day so the chances that they would find him in Romania by this point in time is quite low. Thanks for all your thoughts, and if you want me to add an epilouge, contact me through the site.

Reviewer: Jemma
Date: 01/02/05 22:27
Chapter: Chapter Eight

Hello Amy! sorry to be picky again,- it really is quite a good story- but, shouldnt dumbledore or snape have tracked him down by now, after not seeing him at school? Just a thought

Reviewer: Jemma
Date: 01/02/05 22:04
Chapter: Chapter Three

Amy- I agree with the above review, but respect your thoughts. I t seems dracos being too nice, though maybe this is just another side of him. Maybe the story would work better if it were someone else? Thought i see the importance of draco and dragons, so i dunno

Reviewer: Jemma
Date: 01/02/05 21:55
Chapter: Chapter Two

Pretty goood Amy, but this is a strange side of draco to see when usually he is at school surronded by people and friends. It seems like he's ashamed of his father instead of being behind him all the way, like normal. How come he likes the muggle girl so much cos i reckon the real draco would not want anything to do with muggles. Interesting though, I shall read on.

Reviewer: ReeMarie LeBeau
Date: 12/29/04 22:27
Chapter: Chapter Seven

I think your story is very interesting and seems like it will be very sweet. ^_^ Chack out my story if you can. Please. And update very soon. ^_^

Author's Response: I'm really happy you like my story (and btw, yours is very cool) I'm writing the end at the moment and i hope its sweet enough and that you like it. Thanks for your review! =)

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