I liked it. It's very deep.
Great story! I really liked it and you wrote it really well. I thought how you showed Remus's reasons for being different from other werewolves was very good.
I don't really think that Remus' dad would have let Remus be with a "werewolf gathering" like that, but otherwise this story could definately have happend to Remus. I like how the little boy is so trusting, and how good his parents really are.