i... i loved it, really there is no fanfic i dont like, but this one was great, it honestly made me cry, and i love the fanfictions that make my heart ache, its good to have a heartbreaking story every once and a while, I LOVED IT
wow. very well written, nd very interesting. its just it makes me so sad! lol ginny has always been my favorite character and this was just opposite of her, still i liked it
this fac fiction is a piece of s***. i hope you have written better fanfics in the past or in the VERY near future. and i know that u think im wone of those people who think that the only good fanfics are happy ones. i actually like the miserable ones. i don`t always want a happy ending. but seriously, this story is s***. go die.
Fall out Boy makes me squee!!!!!
That was sad. I don't like sad!
Eew, why is she with Draco, not Harry?
Wow, I got your review and decided to read your story and...wow. That was a very deep, and dark piece. Though I must say that I was terribly confused at the beginning, because after reading your author's page, I thought this was a draco/hermione story, haha! So I had to go back and re-read it once I figured out that it was harry/ginny/draco.
So anyways, I thought this was a great oneshot, your writing is very clean and emotional. I especially liked that you told this story from Harry's POV with no dialouge or any other POVs. That's usually hard to do without losing the interest of the reader, but you did a great job, bravo!
I really liked this line: "I start to ponder how hurt she must feel, to be enslaved by Draco, and to have to obey his commands. I see her quake under his fierce embrace, and I rarely see them talk." and also "I hope my taste pains her as much as hers did me, but somehow I doubt it." those lines were very powerful. Also, where were those lyrics from? I think it was mentioned on your author page, but you should probably include that somewhere on here as well (unless I'm mistaken and those aren't lyrics)
Well, thanks for directing me here, it was a very nice read :)
Author's Response: thanks for the review! i'm writing a new story and your advice was really helpful...plus it was really long so you must have taken the time to think about it! if you can't tell, i'm hapy now! oh, and the words in italic are from numerous fall out boy songs, and they're all brilliant!
I thought the story was good but if you don't mind me saying I did not think it flowed as well as it could of. There were times when I had to go back and read some parts over so that I understood what was happening better. All in all it was good though, keep it up.
Author's Response: thank you for the review, and your comments have helped me work on my new story...keep up the work on a child's gift!
wow this story was...wait, this isn't supposed to happen...anyway i just reviewed my own story by mistake...oh well! go me!
I didn't really get this story. =/
Author's Response: i'm sorry you didn;t understand it...i just read through it and i suppose it could be hard to understand if i wasn't the one writing it! thankyou 4 the review though! :/
Wow that's really good! I read it without looking at the category, and it was really fun to try and figure out who is talking about whom. Keep writing!!
Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you! (enough said) i love potions by the way
great story. really great. u made me feel sad......i hope u write more...10/10
Author's Response: thanx...but i'm sorry i made u feel sad...i'll do my best to write more!!!
wow, this was... different. but still good! i kindof feel bad for Harry though, Ginny being with Draco.
Author's Response: i know...but potter will live on...thanx for the review!!!
12/10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
excellent!!!!!!
Author's Response: damn that's a good review...more of thse please!!!! thanx for the encouragement...
Harry and GInny need to be together!
Why was Ginny with Draco *barfs* ?
why did harry stop loving ginny?
Author's Response: hey, judging by your name, even i'm believing they do, but we need a bit of variety...thanx for the question...and constructive critisism...(i think) :p
harry and ginny need to be together?
whyd u put her draco *barfs*
it was well written, but i didnt like that harry didnt like her any more
Wonderful story! 9/10
Author's Response: thanx so much...ur all so generous...i'll keep writing!!!
