Great story! I love how sarcastic and funny you made Lily and how absolutely annoying James and Sirius were. Can't wait until the next chap!
Author's Response: yayy thanks! I'm glad you love the story. I hope Lily, Sirius, and James were all in canon, and I'll try and get my beta to finish beta-ing the second chapter-- her computer hasn't been working.
Great story! Your ideas are well expressed. I love how you made Lily's character. She talks the way I do when I'm being sarcastic, lol. keep writing!
Author's Response: Lily talks like you? lol. Thanks for your compliments!