sad and touching, really beautiful! the world, both the one we live in and the one we lose ourselves in long enough to write about, they are both quite tragic at times...you spelled this out quite well. nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you! This story is very different from all my other work, so I feel really self-concious about whether people like it or not. I'm glad you did enjoy it! It makes me feel very good about myself.
Wow. That's... amazing. You're a wondeful writer!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Yes it is! haha... thanks for the review!
This is a very dark story and I loved it, you choice of words was brilliant, I actually kinda felt for this story, I really liked it
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Your compiments mean so much to me!
wow....great wording. the whole story was really powerful, really good message too. keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you saw the message I put in my writing. Thanks so much for the review!
wow...that was beautiful
Author's Response: Oh wow... thank you so much!