Reviewer: wicked angel
Date: 12/03/06 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

sad and touching, really beautiful! the world, both the one we live in and the one we lose ourselves in long enough to write about, they are both quite tragic at times...you spelled this out quite well. nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you! This story is very different from all my other work, so I feel really self-concious about whether people like it or not. I'm glad you did enjoy it! It makes me feel very good about myself.

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/10/06 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That's... amazing. You're a wondeful writer!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 09/24/06 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww, sad!

Author's Response: Yes it is! haha... thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SEAMUS_124
Date: 09/21/06 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a very dark story and I loved it, you choice of words was brilliant, I actually kinda felt for this story, I really liked it

~Seamus

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Your compiments mean so much to me!

Reviewer: lost_in_fantasy
Date: 09/21/06 19:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow....great wording. the whole story was really powerful, really good message too. keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you saw the message I put in my writing. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/21/06 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow...that was beautiful


Author's Response: Oh wow... thank you so much!

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