Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 8: Wizard's Chess

Aww! Kip really needs a good kick! & Malfoy really has to speak up. I'm sure if he did, all this would be cleared up nicely...

Hmm, I wonder what would happen if Hermione saw that picture...

Author's Response: Hmm, I wonder.. =)

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 13:00
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part I: Trust Me

I just realized how Romantic the name Everett is. =)

 Also, does this mean that Hermione might recognize him?

Author's Response: Keep reading! ;D

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 12:19
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered

Aww! That scene was amazing! It was really really well written! & poor poor draco! Aww! He's like an older version of 1st year Nivelle, but even clumsier & less confident, if that's possible!

Author's Response: =]

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 11:26
Chapter: Chapter 5: Deep Water

Okay. So I think I got rather confused. This doesn't look canon. Anyway, whatever. I like the story. =)

 the chapter was rather thrilling. =D! & Poor Draco! That Skip kid or whatever his name is needs a kick!

Author's Response: For sure!

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 9:34
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

Oh, I just read your ecplanation in your Author's pge. So it's canon. Sorry. =)

 Aww! I knew it Was Everett!

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes


This is kind of like reading a fiction about different charcters. I don't feel like I'm reading about Draco or Hermione or Harry. Don't get me wrong ,I think this is better! I did say in my first review that I'm more of a canon fan, so this kind of clears the awkwardness around any H/Hr pairing. =) 


Author's Response: Haha, I love it =)

Reviewer: Meme0
Date: 12/03/08 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

It looks interesting from fairst chapter. =)

 I don't know if I manage to finish it, I'm studying for my finalyear in highschool, so I get guilt trips whenever I procrastinate too long.


Haha, The part about GInny marrying Seamus & living in Australia! It made me crack up! I'm mostly canon, but I don't mind much anything else. & I thought, "Oh, now that's one way to put her out of the picture completely. Send her to another continet in the other half of the planet!" .X)

So, I take it Landon is actually Harry? Seems rrather intriguing. =D

Author's Response: Yes! It's so much easier to get rid of characters harmlessly that way! Haha =) Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/23/08 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

Thank You Thank You! it was good and not as bad of a cliff hanger as before. i think he will tell her, but her reaction wont be what he thinks it will be. i think maybe she will find him in the woods and hopefully mention the awkwardness with malfoy so he realizes they dont have a thing and will continue to care for her romantically.

Author's Response: "I think he will tell her, but her reaction wont be what he thinks it will be." Exactly ;)

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/23/08 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior


Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/23/08 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 9: Part II: Heated Blood

everett almost revealed his prior acquaintance with malfoy! good thing malfoy is too screwy in the head to of noticed. i wanted to mention that i noticed you tend to have spelling and grammatical errors. mainly though i enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, I do plan on fixing those once the story is finished. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/23/08 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 9: Part I: Moving Forward

argh! i want an explanation of what sort of spell scobrium is! other than that though, im glad hermione and everett are warming up to each other agn!

Author's Response: You will find out eventually!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/23/08 19:01
Chapter: Chapter 8: Wizard's Chess

wow i just found yr story a few days ago and i really enjoy it! great premise for the plot! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Inkinhart
Date: 11/22/08 21:53
Chapter: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

Brilliant. Absolutely love it. Can you please, please, please, please update???????

Author's Response: It's been approved and should be vaidated any day now!

Reviewer: x3CherryWatermelonx3
Date: 11/21/08 20:50
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

I loved this chapter and the last one! Please, keep going:D

Author's Response: Will do!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part II: The Promise

the pebble. cool idea!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part I: Trust Me

is hermione gonna make the connection to him from the phrase he used with sophie??

Author's Response: I'm not giving away my plot-bunnies!

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered

woow. aaw so romantic and steamy and then DRACO. UGH. he ruined the moment. but ooh the tension for a great cliffhanger. im not even gonna be mad at u for the cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Well that's good to hear! "and then DRACO" hahaha

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 16:12
Chapter: Chapter 5: Deep Water

oh my, chiseled body and such. *sigh* but what did he find?? will the mer people be angry about what he took??

Author's Response: =)

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 15:52
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison

falling in love? hmm seems soon. she just met him and although its possible.. their interactions dont seem to indicate that that makes sense.

Author's Response: Chemistry, m' dear ;)

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 11/21/08 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

i knew it was him.. black and patchy fur made it obvious. cool. cant wait to see whats next. i think you overdid it with draco's timidness though.. i mean how is that possible?? draco? act that way? i know you said a curse but still...

Author's Response: Haha, I like to have a little fun sometimes in my writing.

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