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Name: hpotter225 (Signed) · Date: 02/19/09 23:01 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Great start! Not much has happened, but the characters are alive.

Good characters make a good story.


Name: maddy_neurotic (Signed) · Date: 02/14/09 6:19 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
its wierd..i am not entirely sure i like it


Name: claymor (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 14:16 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
your are killing me here. G! HE WILL TELL her because I really can't take much more of him not telling her. So he will do it for my sanity. He will have a fight with Malfoy because that too has been a long time coming. I see Draco getting his memory back and perhaps recognizing Harry even before Hermione because he will not be clouded by emotion. Sanity on the line here!!!


Name: lupins_girl2006 (Signed) · Date: 02/01/09 2:37 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
I say 'g'.

I don't think he'll get sacked, not yet at least. Dumbledore won't allowed McGonagal sack him, unless he tells Hermione, which is possible. He's probably going to get kissed, so 'd' is definitely one of my answers. He could get poisoned, after all we don't know what Malfoy is planning, do we? So I think it's definitely getting poisoned and either having a fight with Malfoy or having a mental breakdown. Or maybe he won't get poisoned, yet. If that's the case then he'll have the breakdown and the fight.

Keep up the great work!

~Allie


Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 01/26/09 23:13 · For: Chapter 3: Black Cat
So far I'm totally confused.


Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 01/26/09 23:05 · For: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
Definitely different


Name: captburke (Signed) · Date: 01/26/09 22:59 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Well, it certainly sounds intriguing.


Name: romancefreak16311 (Signed) · Date: 01/23/09 17:01 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
i think g. He will have a fight with Malfoy and Tell Hermione


Name: rosemerta (Signed) · Date: 01/23/09 14:48 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
im voting for get poisoned and tell hermione. it would be super dramatic for her to find out, get angry and then get scared because malfoy poisons him. the smirk is indicating to me the amnesia hasnt completely erased malfoys devious plots from his mind.


Name: inkita (Signed) · Date: 01/20/09 23:32 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
He TOTALLY needs to tell her. I mean it. This story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!


Name: stupefyenervate (Signed) · Date: 01/19/09 10:01 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
You're so descriptive with your writing, and each word has a purpose and is not just thrown in to color a sentence; I love this! Keep writing :D


Name: caracat (Signed) · Date: 01/19/09 5:55 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
I say b, though I am hoping for an a to happen soon!


Name: fawkes7 (Signed) · Date: 01/18/09 5:14 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
great chapter

when is the next update???

im dying to read hermoines reaction when she knows everett is harry


Name: Hermyluna (Signed) · Date: 01/17/09 7:53 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Thank you, thank you, thank you for uploading this chapter! I could barely breathe for half the page! You are so good at keeping the tension high. On other matters, I loved this sentence: "Um, yeah. That's why Im here...actually. I've been hearing some interesting stories and uh, thought I would, you know, check it out and such" Because for the first time in your story, I felt that that sentence came from Harry, not form Everett. In all the other chapters, I have thought of Everett as Everett, and Harry was just a name in the past. Now I see the "name in the past" as more than a name. I am so exited to se how Hermione will react when he tells her. Will she love Harry as she loved Everett? Anyways: I think f) because of the turmoil going on inside him: will he tell Hermione the truth, or will he contiue pretending?


Name: bamalam (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 23:59 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
wow this is awesome


Name: Quilter (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 18:22 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Ok Ok it is getting very interesting NOW. Sorry for not reviewing in between like chapter 3/4 and now, but honestly how many times should I write "I like it. I want more. waiting for an update, please dont disapoint..." The story is intreging and I am glad I found it. Thanks for sharing it.


Name: harperkidzmom (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 16:16 · For: Chapter 3: Black Cat
Why a cat? Does he use Prof. McGonnagal as a model?


Name: harperkidzmom (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 16:11 · For: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
So.. Harry *Landon* is in for it now. HErms is probably still royally pissed at him.


Name: harperkidzmom (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 16:08 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
OK. Did Ron & Hermione marry before he went off half'cocked & got himself killed, or is Hermione single?


Name: Quilter (Signed) · Date: 01/16/09 15:04 · For: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
I am hooked.


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