Reviewer: lupins_girl2006
Date: 02/01/09 2:37
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

I say 'g'.

I don't think he'll get sacked, not yet at least. Dumbledore won't allowed McGonagal sack him, unless he tells Hermione, which is possible. He's probably going to get kissed, so 'd' is definitely one of my answers. He could get poisoned, after all we don't know what Malfoy is planning, do we? So I think it's definitely getting poisoned and either having a fight with Malfoy or having a mental breakdown. Or maybe he won't get poisoned, yet. If that's the case then he'll have the breakdown and the fight.

Keep up the great work!

~Allie

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/26/09 23:13
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

So far I'm totally confused.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/26/09 23:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

Definitely different

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/26/09 22:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Well, it certainly sounds intriguing.

Reviewer: romancefreak16311
Date: 01/23/09 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

i think g. He will have a fight with Malfoy and Tell Hermione

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 01/23/09 14:48
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

im voting for get poisoned and tell hermione. it would be super dramatic for her to find out, get angry and then get scared because malfoy poisons him. the smirk is indicating to me the amnesia hasnt completely erased malfoys devious plots from his mind.

Reviewer: inkita
Date: 01/20/09 23:32
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

He TOTALLY needs to tell her. I mean it. This story is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: stupefyenervate
Date: 01/19/09 10:01
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

You're so descriptive with your writing, and each word has a purpose and is not just thrown in to color a sentence; I love this! Keep writing :D

Reviewer: caracat
Date: 01/19/09 5:55
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

I say b, though I am hoping for an a to happen soon!

Reviewer: fawkes7
Date: 01/18/09 5:14
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

great chapter

when is the next update???

im dying to read hermoines reaction when she knows everett is harry

Reviewer: Hermyluna
Date: 01/17/09 7:53
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

Thank you, thank you, thank you for uploading this chapter! I could barely breathe for half the page! You are so good at keeping the tension high. On other matters, I loved this sentence: "Um, yeah. That's why Im here...actually. I've been hearing some interesting stories and uh, thought I would, you know, check it out and such" Because for the first time in your story, I felt that that sentence came from Harry, not form Everett. In all the other chapters, I have thought of Everett as Everett, and Harry was just a name in the past. Now I see the "name in the past" as more than a name. I am so exited to se how Hermione will react when he tells her. Will she love Harry as she loved Everett? Anyways: I think f) because of the turmoil going on inside him: will he tell Hermione the truth, or will he contiue pretending?

Reviewer: bamalam
Date: 01/16/09 23:59
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

wow this is awesome

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 01/16/09 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

Ok Ok it is getting very interesting NOW. Sorry for not reviewing in between like chapter 3/4 and now, but honestly how many times should I write "I like it. I want more. waiting for an update, please dont disapoint..." The story is intreging and I am glad I found it. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: harperkidzmom
Date: 01/16/09 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

Why a cat? Does he use Prof. McGonnagal as a model?

Reviewer: harperkidzmom
Date: 01/16/09 16:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

So.. Harry *Landon* is in for it now. HErms is probably still royally pissed at him.

Reviewer: harperkidzmom
Date: 01/16/09 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

OK. Did Ron & Hermione marry before he went off half'cocked & got himself killed, or is Hermione single?

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 01/16/09 15:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

I am hooked.

Reviewer: Quilter
Date: 01/16/09 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Nice intro. caught us up quickly with the main charachters. At the same time leaving enough of a mystery to be engaging. Catching enough to continue. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Ggigx
Date: 01/16/09 14:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Well buddy i am unable to review ur 12 chapter if this works excellent the chapter was good and iam dying to read next chapter

Reviewer: caracat
Date: 01/15/09 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

I want the rest! I'm hooked!!!!

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