Reviewer: relaxrelapse830
Date: 10/16/09 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

in the next chapter, everett will a. tell hermione, because i'm tired of waiting for him to tell her! ahhh! it's so frustrating. every time i open a new chapter i think "okay, he'll tell her in this one... in this one..." and he never does!!! i'm pulling my hair out! lol.

Reviewer: The 8th Horcrux
Date: 10/16/09 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

I strongly dislike you for stopping this, when it was so good:.(

Reviewer: HClovesPhelps
Date: 10/10/09 16:45
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

Malfoy is hilarious

Reviewer: destinyismyfate
Date: 10/09/09 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

PLEASE UPDATE. NOW. I'M WAITING ANXIOUSLY...

Reviewer: mystery_10
Date: 10/08/09 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

The story is great. I think it will be=g both a and b. Pleeease put the next chapter up.

Reviewer: RyanB
Date: 10/04/09 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

I have started reading this splendid piece of work only today 04/10/09 (dd/mm/yy) or 10/04/09 (mm/dd/yy) i notice that you said that Chapter 13 would be pretty big, i don't want to sound at all pushy but the last update we had on this fic was back in January, i do hope that you continue with this as what is there already is nothing short of fantastic, in relation to your note at the end, i would go for option G with Everett/Harry getting Kissed and telling Hermione about everything. I hope that you continue with this as it is brilliant and what you have left it at has me almost begging you to do more. If you can, please send me a mail telling me whether or not you intend to continue. Thanks and for whats been done so far 10/10

Reviewer: biteme13
Date: 10/02/09 18:50
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

G. have a mental breakdown and be kissed

Reviewer: biteme13
Date: 10/01/09 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

i love how u mentioned Beowulf as a non fiction character...he's awesome!

Reviewer: BrianG
Date: 09/25/09 13:28
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

Are you going to finish this story?

Reviewer: SparkzMxzXZ
Date: 09/08/09 7:13
Chapter: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

Great job!! ((:

Reviewer: SparkzMxzXZ
Date: 09/08/09 6:17
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered

This is wonderful! Favourite-d at once! ((: Poor Draco, though.

Reviewer: SparkzMxzXZ
Date: 09/08/09 5:55
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison

I'm a great fan of H/Hr, but I think now that this new Malfoy is very sweet!! (: Nice story!

Reviewer: zenrina
Date: 09/04/09 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

well, I find it disconcerting that proffessor landon turns into a cat, just like proffessor mcgonagal, and if landon is who I think he is, shouldn't he have a better animagus?

other than that, I love your story, its sooo intruiging!

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 08/29/09 22:23
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

My choice is g. I hope b and d would happen. I really wish you'd continue the fic. I'm very anxious about the ending.

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 08/29/09 9:59
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered

Yipee!

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 08/29/09 7:49
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison

You have no problems with writing. You convey the idea directly and you have no errors in grammar and sentence flow.

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 08/29/09 7:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

It's cute that hermione and draco are friends. I've really been struggling to find good h/hr fics. Good thing I trof upon your fic. I really do hope you complete this. :) You've just made my day.

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 08/29/09 6:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Nice plot.

Reviewer: mashalorama
Date: 08/15/09 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

good connectivity in thought and expression and good flow in ideas. so far i have not discovered anything that dissapoints me in ur manner of writing

Reviewer: mashalorama
Date: 08/15/09 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

good connectivity in thought and expression and good flow in ideas. so far i have not discovered anything that dissapoints me in ur manner of writing

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