Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 9: Part II: Heated Blood

Oh my. This is turning out to be quite exciting.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 9:09
Chapter: Chapter 9: Part I: Moving Forward

Your plot is developing well.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 9:00
Chapter: Chapter 8: Wizard's Chess

Ha! Very good work, very good indeed.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:54
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part III: The Necklace

Good job. You seem to have a great eye for storytelling.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:53
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part II: The Promise

Excellent work as usual.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:49
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part I: Trust Me

Hurrah! Finally getting someplace!

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered

OOohh very cute. Poor Draco though...

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:18
Chapter: Chapter 5: Deep Water

Very sweet. I imagine he found something that he recognizes?

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:12
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison

Excellent so far.

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat

This is really good. Keep up the good work and define your character basis more!

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

Excellent plot development!

Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Good beginning... the foreshadowing is excellent.

Reviewer: Nikala Hegemann
Date: 01/11/10 23:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

Tell Heromione
Get sacked

Reviewer: littlechemist
Date: 01/03/10 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

alright...another to go...you will actually get a more articulate review, when I finish... tee hee!

Reviewer: littlechemist
Date: 01/03/10 22:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Very interest so far, still reading...on to the next chapter!

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 12/14/09 3:24
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

Please, please, please update! I love Harmony fics but no one ever finishes them! My guess is g with b and c as the two options!!!

Reviewer: Shibby14
Date: 11/24/09 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

I think/hope Everett and Draco are gonna have a fight. Its about time we get to see some manly asskicking.

Overall a very good story, although I think it needs a bit more action. May be something like deatheaters attacking the school and killing a bunch of random people you dont care about. Thats always fun.

P.S Guys dont use the word "gosh". :P

Reviewer: Keroberros
Date: 11/17/09 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

HI! I love the idea of Draco being repulsed by bad behaviour because he has no memory of who he used to be. It's brilliant! I'm loving this so far and cant wait to read the rest

Reviewer: neopolitan1177
Date: 11/10/09 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

i choose "h" - all of the above!! or maybe just a, b, c, and d. please keep writing! this is really great!

Reviewer: jeans205
Date: 11/07/09 23:56
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes

GAH!!! This is so addicting!! put up the next chapter please!!

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