Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 9:09
Chapter: Chapter 9: Part I: Moving Forward
Your plot is developing well.
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 9:00
Chapter: Chapter 8: Wizard's Chess
Ha! Very good work, very good indeed.
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:54
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part III: The Necklace
Good job. You seem to have a great eye for storytelling.
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:53
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part II: The Promise
Excellent work as usual.
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:49
Chapter: Chapter 7: Part I: Trust Me
Hurrah! Finally getting someplace!
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered
OOohh very cute. Poor Draco though...
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:18
Chapter: Chapter 5: Deep Water
Very sweet. I imagine he found something that he recognizes?
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/18/10 8:12
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison
Excellent so far.
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: Black Cat
This is really good. Keep up the good work and define your character basis more!
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
Excellent plot development!
Reviewer: TheImmortalPhoenix
Date: 01/17/10 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Good beginning... the foreshadowing is excellent.
Reviewer: Nikala Hegemann
Date: 01/11/10 23:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Tell Heromione
Get sacked
Reviewer: littlechemist
Date: 01/03/10 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
alright...another to go...you will actually get a more articulate review, when I finish... tee hee!
Reviewer: littlechemist
Date: 01/03/10 22:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Very interest so far, still reading...on to the next chapter!
Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 12/14/09 3:24
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Please, please, please update! I love Harmony fics but no one ever finishes them! My guess is g with b and c as the two options!!!
Reviewer: Shibby14
Date: 11/24/09 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
I think/hope Everett and Draco are gonna have a fight. Its about time we get to see some manly asskicking.
Overall a very good story, although I think it needs a bit more action. May be something like deatheaters attacking the school and killing a bunch of random people you dont care about. Thats always fun.
P.S Guys dont use the word "gosh". :P
Reviewer: Keroberros
Date: 11/17/09 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
HI! I love the idea of Draco being repulsed by bad behaviour because he has no memory of who he used to be. It's brilliant! I'm loving this so far and cant wait to read the rest
Reviewer: neopolitan1177
Date: 11/10/09 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
i choose "h" - all of the above!! or maybe just a, b, c, and d. please keep writing! this is really great!
Reviewer: jeans205
Date: 11/07/09 23:56
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
GAH!!! This is so addicting!! put up the next chapter please!!
Reviewer: relaxrelapse830
Date: 10/16/09 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
in the next chapter, everett will a. tell hermione, because i'm tired of waiting for him to tell her! ahhh! it's so frustrating. every time i open a new chapter i think "okay, he'll tell her in this one... in this one..." and he never does!!! i'm pulling my hair out! lol.