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Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 9:20 · For: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth
This is really good. Continue please!

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 9:16 · For: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior
Hmmm.... dear me this is getting interesting.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 9:13 · For: Chapter 9: Part II: Heated Blood
Oh my. This is turning out to be quite exciting.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 9:09 · For: Chapter 9: Part I: Moving Forward
Your plot is developing well.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 9:00 · For: Chapter 8: Wizard's Chess
Ha! Very good work, very good indeed.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:54 · For: Chapter 7: Part III: The Necklace
Good job. You seem to have a great eye for storytelling.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:53 · For: Chapter 7: Part II: The Promise
Excellent work as usual.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:49 · For: Chapter 7: Part I: Trust Me
Hurrah! Finally getting someplace!

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:41 · For: Chapter 6: Romance Discovered
OOohh very cute. Poor Draco though...

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:18 · For: Chapter 5: Deep Water
Very sweet. I imagine he found something that he recognizes?

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/18/10 8:12 · For: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison
Excellent so far.

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/17/10 21:03 · For: Chapter 3: Black Cat
This is really good. Keep up the good work and define your character basis more!

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/17/10 20:56 · For: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
Excellent plot development!

Name: TheImmortalPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 01/17/10 20:34 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Good beginning... the foreshadowing is excellent.

Name: Nikala Hegemann (Signed) · Date: 01/11/10 23:26 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Tell Heromione
Get sacked

Name: littlechemist (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 23:04 · For: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes
alright...another to go...you will actually get a more articulate review, when I finish... tee hee!

Name: littlechemist (Signed) · Date: 01/03/10 22:58 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
Very interest so far, still reading...on to the next chapter!

Name: the opaleye (Signed) · Date: 12/14/09 3:24 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
Please, please, please update! I love Harmony fics but no one ever finishes them! My guess is g with b and c as the two options!!!

Name: Shibby14 (Signed) · Date: 11/24/09 16:48 · For: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade Mistakes
I think/hope Everett and Draco are gonna have a fight. Its about time we get to see some manly asskicking.

Overall a very good story, although I think it needs a bit more action. May be something like deatheaters attacking the school and killing a bunch of random people you dont care about. Thats always fun.

P.S Guys dont use the word "gosh". :P

Name: Keroberros (Signed) · Date: 11/17/09 14:35 · For: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies
HI! I love the idea of Draco being repulsed by bad behaviour because he has no memory of who he used to be. It's brilliant! I'm loving this so far and cant wait to read the rest

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