Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 04/05/08 4:26
Chapter: The Quest

lol. second time(or third im not too sure) i read this story and it still makes me crack up. its written really really good and i just love your style of writing. you have a great potential and talent. i love the way you made this story so unique and interesting. My favorite thing in this story is that the names of the quaffels match up with all those nasty slytherins. that just made me smile and laugh. And i also love your neville, you really created him perfectly to suit the style of the story. great job again and i hope you are still writing as you are really very good at it.^^made me smile and made my day jsut a little bit brighter yay^^

Author's Response: Ah, thanks, you made my day. I am trying to write. I am very very glad you liked this story. I couldnt get online tor ead fan fiction, so I decided to write my own. I never thought it would turn out so well. Thank you.

Reviewer: Raffles
Date: 05/20/07 2:16
Chapter: The Quest

Thats a great story. Its very funny and relates to the acual books because Harry did awake Ron.

Author's Response: Well thank you! I'm glad you saw that too, it was te plan! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: ravenclaw_rox
Date: 01/14/07 14:37
Chapter: The Quest

Ha! That was funny! And quite creative on your part. Great alternative universe-type-thing. Loved it!

Author's Response: Why thnk you. I loved writing it. It was super fun. I am have another alternate universe thing in the works. :D

Reviewer: novalearae
Date: 12/15/06 13:09
Chapter: The Quest

that was sooooooooo not funny.

Author's Response: Sorry.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 12/08/06 17:31
Chapter: The Quest

:D Lol, a dream journal... I really enjoyed this little excusion into the wacky world of AU!! It was a really fun story to read, and I like the prophetic aspects (and the wishful aspects, too!) I don't really think Dudley would have been in the dream, though... he's more Harry's problem, but then again, I guess it's a dream, after all...
Anyway, it was a cool story!

Author's Response: Dudley was an addition because of how Harry talks about him. I mean Fred and George had a whole plot to make his tounge swell, why not have Ron dream about him. Thank you for the review and I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: sweeterthanhunny
Date: 10/07/06 4:21
Chapter: The Quest

Er......Hary likes Ginny and vice versa and you know it and want them to get together and you like Hermione. DUH!! Thats what it means, Ronald Bilius (*Breaks out into a giggling fit at the mention of his second name- sooo stupid!!*) Weasley.

Author's Response: Hehehe exactamentaly!!! LOL thamks for the review! :D

Reviewer: Wonderclam
Date: 10/01/06 23:07
Chapter: The Quest

this was really interesting, and quite amusing. gryffindoria, muggledon, and the quaffle monsters all had me laughing out loud. good job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes I was quite amused myself while writing it... I am glad you laughed out loud! Tis so much better than laughing in your head!!!

Reviewer: yellowlime
Date: 09/28/06 18:37
Chapter: The Quest

OMG! That was good. I love the way it all ended. Fantasmious!

Author's Response: OHHH!! you comented!!! YAY!!! im glad you like it!!! i LOVE your story!!1 I hope they validate it soon!!!

Reviewer: Mind_Over_Matter
Date: 09/27/06 9:44
Chapter: The Quest

This is a really clever idea - exactly the kind of clever idea I'd never think of, but then I'd find someone who did think of it and review their story about how good an idea it was, in fact. It's about time Ron got a chance to dream something which can compete with Harry's dream of McGonagall playing the bag pipes...

I really love your... unique character 'interpretations'. I particularly liked the description of the Quaffles ^^ To be very honest, the only suggestion/whatever I can think of is that the ending feels a little quick - you know? I'd love it if it had happened at just the wrong moment, for example when Ron's about to say 'I do' at his wedding, or Ginevra's about to have her babies.
And I can also just imagine Ron's reflection on the dream - and can certainly see him seeing Harry and Ginny in a new, much more suspicious light.

But anyway, like I said, this is a fun story based very witty idea. Well done!

Author's Response: WOW!!! Longest review yet!!! You deserve a prize!!! How about a chapter dedicated to you in my other fic??? Sound bueno??? Ok, and about your sugestion , yes i know where i ended it sucked... but it was getting a little too long... But you right i should have had just that extra bit more... next time feel free to go on and on... even if it isnt about good things!!! :D Im glad you liked it, check out my other fic and watch the A/N in the next chapter... I will mentio you!!! LOL THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/27/06 0:05
Chapter: The Quest

"They were so much more fun than Bludgers or Crumpled Horned Snorkacks."
--You had me officially hooked right there.

This is just too wonderfully fantastically good.

I love your style : )

Author's Response: Yes i loved that part as well. I am so gald you liked it!!! Thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 09/26/06 21:52
Chapter: The Quest

Oh! I love how it all turned out to be a dream! In fact, I loved the whole thing!

Author's Response: REALLY??? wow thatnks!!! :D Yea... dremas are fun... and after all of Harry's crazy dreams I figured Ron deserved at least one too!!!

Reviewer: Adam Hunter
Date: 09/26/06 18:36
Chapter: The Quest

Wow! Great story! Boy, this Tommy guy sounds like a really cool person!

Author's Response: HA!!! hes one of the best... if only he wasnt so sarcastic... Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: sunshine
Date: 09/26/06 16:46
Chapter: The Quest

I was laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes. I loved it!
You are sooo talented : )

Author's Response: YAY!!! tears of laughter are i good thing... I am so happy you made my day!!! *happy dance*...talented *blushes* thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 09/26/06 14:07
Chapter: The Quest

haha! I liked it a lot. I like how it was all a dream and you ended it with the part of Half Blood Prince. Good job!

Author's Response: Why thank you!! !:D I was going to end it after the game Gryffindor won in the Order but then I couldn't have all of the stuff about Luna... plus that scene is so memorable!!! Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 09/26/06 10:53
Chapter: The Quest

Very funny! Though I am disappointed that Princess Ginerva didn't hava a chance to deliver her twins. It was all a dream! Great job. I'll watch for your other fic - I too am H/G & R/Hr shipper.

Author's Response: Yes, I very much wanted to write that part as well. But it was rapidly becoming more than a one-shot as I planned. But just in case you were wondering the babies names were James Fredrick Potter and Liliam Georgia Potter... I would have had more inventive names but its Ron's dream!!! LOL :D I am so glad you liked it though!!!

Author's Response: Note: that is supposed to say Lilian... and my other fic (well the first chapter) is up!!!

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