Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/05/11 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 7: The First Day

AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/05/11 17:51
Chapter: Chapter 5: What Makes Life Worth Living

This is lookin' AWESOME!!

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/05/11 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

This is a really good story. of course theres a typo here and there,but even the best mess up a tiny bit sometimes.

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/05/11 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Emotional and Mental State

Wow......This is really good as far as romance goes. I also really like your writing style. But for the romance.....I'm speechless. Which I've read some good romance stuff. And really and truly this might be the best romance I've seen in any writer. From Kids writers to those cheesy romance novels(That i hate with a passion,No pun intended)

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/05/11 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down

I thought she wasn't dead. This can't exactly be considered a J/L romance if the L is dead.

Reviewer: katha4
Date: 02/04/11 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Hey!
First of all, I wanted to thank you so much!
Your story was - no is! - so amazing! I was not able to stop reading. I even read a bit between two lessons, biting everyone interrupting me and answering my teachers question about getting starting the lessons with the words "I'm really sorry but I can't start until Lily finally kisses him." xD
Back to the topic: Your story was so amazing, I laughed, cried (both things I do not very often because of something I read) and just was not able to stop reading.
Your ability to write is so impressiv, I (reading at least 2 books every week) have to admit it's one of the best I ever read.
Thank you for this amazing time you gave me!
I really hope you keep writing storys and not you're not letting anyone change something about your way to write ever.
Have a very nice day,
K.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 01/22/11 14:07
Chapter: Prologue

Love This story! You did such a good job with it. I am a big fan of Emmiline Vance.

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 01/16/11 12:46
Chapter: Chapter 9: You Lose

Cute ending to this chapter

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 01/15/11 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 4: Itty Bitty Potters Gone Wild

I love the way you make James mature in the story and I enjoy James's point of view on love, I argee with him on all accounts.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! :)

Reviewer: Wanted
Date: 01/12/11 10:53
Chapter: The Epilogue

I loved it. Cried three times. Thats a good thing btw :) haha

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it it :)

Reviewer: katerinapatrova
Date: 12/25/10 20:41
Chapter: Prologue

I don't know how to explain how awesome this fanfic is!! you are an amazing writer. The marauder era is my favorite in the series and the way you portray each character is EXACTLY how i imagined they would be.
I especially loved the Sirius and Lily in the broom closet scene. It was hilarious and cute at the same time.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it and you think I portrayed all the characters well :) That scene in the broom closet was one of my favourites to write, so I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Bexia
Date: 12/20/10 8:49
Chapter: Prologue

Overall, I really loved your story and admired your writing style.
The way you develop characters is spectacular in every way except perhaps Lily and James, coincidentally. They were a wee bit too whiny and the change happened much too fast.
You paint scenes very clearly and, as a reader and writer, I can appreciate that.
I particularly like the way you portray Sirius. Some people make him out to be flippant and carefree, but you showed a much deeper characterization of him that makes you stand out.
Keep writing. Every day. You have a gift, so don't waste it. I really loved reading this story. It is wholly unique:)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it for the most part, even if you didn't much care for how James and Lily were written.

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 12/18/10 8:38
Chapter: Chapter 7: The First Day

Oh!!! I so looove spontaneous Lily!!!!!!

Author's Response: Me too! :)

Reviewer: LightningBlast_99
Date: 12/10/10 1:39
Chapter: The Epilogue

Oh i forget to mention ill pick u up was AMAZING too!!!

Reviewer: LightningBlast_99
Date: 12/10/10 1:36
Chapter: The Epilogue

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW
i know its a bit late to post a review now seeibg as u wrote this ages ago but i really couldnt resist
This i by far da BEST lily james story i have read
I especially loved the part where sirius insisted that they had eloped
Your other stories were absolutely amazing too
Like uncle fred calls him dick
Long distance extendable ears
Hats off to you and i hope you dont stop writing any time soon!

Reviewer: proud_to_be_a_muggle
Date: 11/25/10 19:35
Chapter: The Epilogue

Yes, I have read every chapter and can't say that DISLIKED any of them (except mabe the epilogue because it really was pretty depresing and I could have lived beleiving in a sort of happy ending even though it was so believable. It was so depressing because it WAS so believable.). But I so wish you would add few more early, happy memories in the epilogue. I loved his proposal scene! And not just that he proposed but what he said about to her. And I also really liked the scene with Dumbledore and Lily when he asked for her to join the Order and his explanation about her actions. And I really liked that Serius was trying to convince Professor Mcgonagal that Lily and James had eloped but it didn't seem real how she and Dumbledore seemed to stay light and not to worried and not threatening and pressuring them more. I am so glad you mentioned Gabby Lewis at the end because it wa bugging me that James had not revealed Ted had lied to Emma and Lily about his family and I am glad that such a sweet deep girl does not really know what happened to her brother. It is sad to me that Alice and Julie just slipped out of Lily's life even though they had tried so hard to stay in but I guess that just happens. And I love all the completely wierd nicknames for Lily like -my darling lamb-, -my flower-, and insults like -being a lemon-. Anyway there was a perfect balance of humor, happiness, and tradegy through most of the story and THANK-YOU for the amazing read!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dilu98
Date: 11/23/10 7:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down

U r the best. I love ur stories they are so exciting and it is also very touching.

Reviewer: proud_to_be_a_muggle
Date: 11/22/10 9:13
Chapter: Chapter 26: Comfortably Numb, part 1

Hey, this is my first review but that does not mean that I have not loved your story and love you for writting it. WHAT HAPPENED TO LILY AFTER EMMA WENT UNCONSIOUS? I mean really you keep mentioning it slightly then lily can't take it anymore. I get that Lily went through an exteremely traumatic event and new things keep coming up but she really needs to have some backbone and stick to one belief and also its abou time she opened up about what happened and stop asking for people to understand when they don't know what they are supposed to understand. I am also glad that James stood up and did what he thaught he should do and he is back to being persistent. I really hope Lily doesn't really leave but it might be what she needs even though everyone at Hogwarts will be angry betrayed or dissapointed.

Reviewer: spaceexplorer99
Date: 11/10/10 16:38
Chapter: Prologue

I must say, truely was a pleasure spending all day reading this :)
Out of most of the other James/Lilly fics the plot you envisioned was by far the best and made the most sense as of how it not only shapped James but also Lilly into the people Harry later hears about.
Again great job, and really can't wait to read the rest of your stories
Btw idk if it's been asked or not, but when Lilles running with Wormtail that early morning, and ultimately decides to Visit the graves, was it purely just a coincedense(spelling) that the four of them meet up with Ted again, or since we later find out that Ted isn't a poser DeathEater, was it Peter setting up Lilly, to later on meet Voldy?
Again great story ::)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! That's high praise! I'm glad you liked it. I don't think Peter had yet turned to a Death Eater in their seventh year, so in my mind Ted came there to run into them by his own calculations that they would find him, but I never say so either way, so you're free to think what you want :)

Reviewer: harrypotterandbenbarnes
Date: 09/30/10 22:35
Chapter: Prologue

So, I'm going to be honest here. I wish I never found your stories. And no, not because they are awful, actually the opposite. They are amazing. I love them, and i have spent so much of my time reading them. I read the, "I'll Pick You Up" and it was probably the most amazing thing ever. I have always been a HP fanatic, and it has always been hard for me to read fan fictions because many are flawed in the real details of the actual stories. Yours, however, are not. They are all factually correct and link things together. I love it. You have all the names correct, and it just really shows how much time and effort you put into your stories. Your writing is amazing, you are extremely talented. I feel like if JK Rowling herself read this she would think "These are exactly how i imagined these characters" These are so well written, i go back and think it actually happened, that this is the true story, not just made up by a fan. Your stories move me to tears. They are honest, well researched, funny and romantic. It is the perfect mixture of love and romance with action mystery and adventure. Thank you so much for helping me keep the world of Harry Potter alive for me. And i'm sorry this isn't really a review, I am just praising you for all you do. Thank you. Oh and this is on the wrong story, but the last part of the epilogue for "I'll pick you up" made me cry. It was so beautiful but I was also crying because it was over. I love this. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: Such high praise! Thanks you so much -- I'm glad you really enjoyed my stories :) I'll Pick You Up was a huge project for me, and I really poured myself into it in an attempt to characterize everyone well and make the plot all come together, so I'm happy to hear (to read!) that you liked it and appreciated it! Fanfiction has a reputation, I think, for being poorly-written, sub-par and silly imitations of another's work (and it often is!), but there is certainly good fanfiction out there, and I'm glad you consider mine among it!

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