Reviewer: harryfan221
Date: 07/31/09 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down


Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: I Am Peeves
Date: 07/27/09 5:04
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I'm very interested. This chapter was beyond brilliant. I really love your portrayal of Emmeline an thought that the part with her kissing Sirius was perfect. Bring on the Epilogue !!!

Author's Response: Good! I'm glad you liked this chapter and the scene with Emma and Sirius. Thanks for the review! The epilogue should be up soon.

Reviewer: elderwand17
Date: 07/27/09 4:07
Chapter: Prologue

its over?! you HAVE HAVE to write more lily and james stories because honestly speaking, no one writes them like you do!
loved it ALL xx

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you think so :) I've another Lily/James epic fic in the works, so hopefully that'll make up for this one coming to a close!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/26/09 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

wow that was amazing. I can't belive the actuall story is over. It seems to have been here so long. That was a very cute marriage proposal and i couldn't have pictured a better one. I want to go back and read some of the chapters over again that's how good this was. you have to be one of the authors that managed to grasp the characters the best. They seem real in your story. Congrats.

Author's Response: Thanks! I can hardly believe its over! I'm glad you liked the proposal and that you think I write the characters well -- I think that's the most important part of fanfiction: nobody wants to read fanfiction that doesn't capture the characters of the genre, whatever that genre may be, well. Thanks again -- you reviewed every chapter and it was greatly appreciated :)

Reviewer: byebye
Date: 07/26/09 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

honestly, i must say, the end was worth the wait. i could hardly contain my excitment every time you updated, and i will of course read the epilouge, who wouldnt?
i love the story, the way you made everything plausible, and real, and so alive. ive never read another story where i anticipated so much, where i was suprised so much, and yet, still found the story interesting.
congrats on completion, on the writing, and of course on the way every character seemed exactly the way they were supposed to be.
thank you for writing it =]

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's good to hear that it was worth the wait -- I certainly made you all wait quite a lot! And I'm glad loved it so much and always anticipated upcoming chapters :) Oh, and of course I'm glad I could surprise you, too; I always like writing plot twists! Hopefully you'll like the epilogue.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 07/26/09 10:15
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

i cannnot believe thats its over already! this fanfiction has been my favourite ever!


the scene in the hospital wing so like the one in the Philosopher stone with harry and dumbledore. i loved that.


and the proposal was so cute. usually authors when james and lily get engaged at an early age make it sound a little unrealistic. but you made it perfect!

and emma and sirius. i dont know what they are now but whatever it is its perfect ;)


Author's Response: I can't really believe its over, either! I've been working on it for so long now, I don't know what I'll do with my free time after this! I was thinking of all those scenes between Harry and Dumbledore when I wrote that scene with Lily and Dumbledore. And I'm glad you liked the proposal! I don't think getting engaged in school in the real world is very smart, but somehow I can swallow Lily and James doing it -- and it's good to know you think I wrote it realistically :) Oh, and you'll get more on exactly what Emma and Sirius are in the epilogue; they're kind of the stars of it.

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 07/26/09 4:44
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I feel so sad for Emma i really wanted her to be happy.

Author's Response: I feel a little bad for Emma, too. There's more of her in the Epilogue, though.

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 07/26/09 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I loved it!
Sirius and Emma, the way James proposed to Lily, it was great.
I can't wait for the epilogue!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked how it all played out :)

Reviewer: swordfish0
Date: 07/26/09 0:06
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

LOVE. That is how I feel about your story. L.O.V.E.
And I SO called Emma and Sirius. I am so smart. I like that. They can be... whatever it is they are.
One of my favorite quotes:
"ttle girls and boys with black hair and green eyes or red hair and hazel eyes, little girls and boys that were always getting into trouble and loved to play Quidditch."
Because that so perfectly describes somebody we all know and love.
I'm not such a huge fan of James and Lily getting engaged while still that young, still at Hogwarts, but that hardly matters. And if anyone can do it, I give this story permission to. :]
Thank you a million times for it!
Also, just out of curiosity, you wouldn't happen to be studying journalism? Just the way Emma was thinking about it made made wonder...
Time to write another one, eh?? :]
can't wait for the epilogue.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Truth be told I don't like the idea of people, not even Lily and James, getting engaged that young. I would certainly be upset if my friends in serious relationships tried to get engaged that young. However, J.K. Rowling had them getting married young so. . . . But thank you for giving me permission ;) I am not, actually, studying journalism, although I was the Editor-in-Chief of my high school paper! The epilogue will be up soon; hopefully it won't disappoint.

Reviewer: shmalt
Date: 07/25/09 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Wow...Just...Wow! This is a fantastic story! Can't wait for the Epilouge!
Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! The epilogue should be up soon.

Reviewer: piratelove123
Date: 07/25/09 22:40
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Outstanding. You are, without a doubt, my favourite fanfiction author, and this is, without a doubt, my favourite Lily/James fanfiction (perhaps even my favourite fanfiction all together). I want to thank you for writing this. I feel the same gratitute towards you that I feel towards the authors of my favourite books. I look forward to reading the epilogue and anything else that you write. Once again, thank you, and well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I put so much of myself into this story that it's good to know it was well liked, and you're most certainly welcome :) Hopefully the epilogue won't disappoint!

Reviewer: brighterer
Date: 07/25/09 13:19
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

AWwww! thanks so much for writing one of my most favourite fiction ever! I loved the ending and the proposal! i'll be waiting for the epilouge!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you consider this one of your favorite fanfictions :) The epilogue should be up soon!

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/25/09 12:13
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I really love this story. It was great. This chapter was good too. I was expecting to read about Lily and James going to fight Voldemort but I didn't. It was a good suprise. I can't wait for the epologue.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hopefully you'll like the epilogue, too! :)

Reviewer: cia
Date: 07/20/09 6:06
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

hey..the story is so good but i can't see the next chapter anywhere..u've gotta put it up..

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue! Hopefully it'll be accepted and posted soon. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: piratelove123
Date: 07/19/09 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

I really love everything you write. You are an AMAZING author. This story is my absolute favourite. Update soon, please... :)

Author's Response: Thanks! That's good to hear :) The next chapter is already in the queue.

Reviewer: swordfish0
Date: 07/13/09 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening

you know what i think is the mark of a killer story?
when you forget that you know how things have to end, you're so caught up in the now.
For instance, I keep forgetting that Lily and James have to get married and have Harry and be killed later.
I am way to nervous that something will happen and one of them will kick it.
But that's the beauty of, like i said, a killer story.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad I could involve you so deeply in the story :)

Reviewer: swordfish0
Date: 07/13/09 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

“No?” asked James. “What else do you have to do, exactly? Kick a puppy? Steal a cane from an old woman? Spit on a gravestone?

OH baby i love James!!!
BLESS YOUR SOUL for updating. I gather it's not your fault, it's someone else who won't get the chapters up.
I just can't say enough how much I love James.
And I pity stupid stupid Ted. He's a freak, but i feel really bad for him.
I think Sirius and Emma should become best friends. They could handle one another.
Oh my, i could go on and on and on. I love this story. It's totally brill.
Thank you Thank you.
I doubt you can do much about this, but, please update soon?

Author's Response: Haha, I love James, too! Sirius and Emma do seem like they could handle one another, don't they? I'm glad you liked this chapter and you love the story so much; I really will try and update soon and hopefully it'll be posted soon, too! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: maya potter
Date: 07/12/09 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

OMG that was soo soo amzing
thank you soo very much
though u did take your time
nevertheless i found it worth the waiting
again ..thank you so very much

is that an enough for a review??
if u want more just tell me XD

Author's Response: Thanks very much! It did take forever to be updated, I know, but in my defense -- it was in the queue for over two months! And any review is appreciated :)

Reviewer: lilbells
Date: 07/11/09 8:01
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

that was sooo good!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 07/10/09 23:57
Chapter: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening

This chapter was absolutely worth the wait. You put detail and suspense into an already exciting chapter.
A great story that keeps getting better.

Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's good to know you thought it worth the wait : )

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