Reviewer: GreenEyesLoveNeverDies
Date: 01/01/13 16:59
Chapter: The Epilogue
god this is killing me especially since I'm listening to Canon in D
Reviewer: CatchtheSnitch
Date: 07/14/12 15:04
Chapter: The Epilogue
Completely in love with this whole story. The plot you came up with was just fantastic, and I absolutely love your characters and the arguments and the fluff and....well, everything is great. You're a really wonderful writer, and I'm going to strive to write as well as you do. Great job!
Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/18/12 17:05
Chapter: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave
THAT WAS AWESOME
Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/16/12 10:16
Chapter: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon
I can't get onto this chapter! It won't let me read anymore :'( i click on the chapter and then it says the warning thingy and i click on continue and it just goes back to the chapter page! ive tried leaving it, and going onto it from a different page and going from the previous chapter but i cant get on to any of it xx i think its coz its 6 - 7th years :( any tips? i really need help! thank you x
Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/15/12 18:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Emotional and Mental State
Another fabulous chapter :) i read this about a year ago and wanted to read it again xx been looking for it for about 3 months! you have no idea how happy i am that i can read it again! :)
Reviewer: zlm20
Date: 06/15/12 13:00
Chapter: Prologue
Just wanted to say, you are the only author I have right now on my Favorites, which obviously means your a good writer! I luv this story. Best on MuggleNet by far!!!!!
Reviewer: Chanichani
Date: 06/14/12 17:12
Chapter: The Epilogue
That was the best story EVER!!!!!!!! Though the epilogue is a little sad, well very sad. But I loved it anyway! But why, oh why, did you have to kill emma!!!! She was my favorite character!!!!!
Reviewer: zlm20
Date: 06/10/12 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath
I Adore this story!!! This is the story I read when I want something familiar and terrific to read. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: TheInvisibilityCloakOwner
Date: 03/11/12 12:18
Chapter: The Epilogue
Really, I Have Absolutely No Words In Description :)
Your A Wonderful Writer MagEd.
Reviewer: ginnys_little_sister
Date: 12/01/11 23:58
Chapter: The Epilogue
When I first started reading this story, you had not finished it yet. I think it only to chapter 16 at the time! But it always stayed with me, I always remember it, and wanted to read it again. And finally 2 days ago I came back on mugglenet from another fan fiction site and really wanted to read this story, but I didn't know what the name was..... But I saw the title read the little description, thought it might be it. When I started reading the first chapter I knew it was it! I was so happy to finally have found it! I was even happier to know that it was completed!
Thank you so much!
It was an amazing story! I absolutely loved it!
Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 08/02/11 16:30
Chapter: The Epilogue
Wow what an exciting story! I think my favourite part was Sirius insisting that James and Lily had eloped!
And, in reference to my previous review, you did not offend me! I'm sorry if I made it sound that way, I just felt I had to point a few things out! I can tell alot of fans on here are American - its nice to know you in the states love Potter so much!
Great work, though I'm glad I read it after it was completed. I might even check out some of your other stuff.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 08/01/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 6: Cooties
Hey I'm really enjoying this story so far! I think James' plan is a clever twist, keeps things interesting! I also think the darkness bits are good, they make me enjoy the fluffy romantic bits more!
However, speaking as a British person I have to object to the word "cooties". I have never heard anyone British use it; I don't even know what it means (though I can take a guess)! You impressed me when you used "primary school", but being a picky, and rather proud Brit, I feel that I have to point out that James or anyone at Hogwarts would have used that word!
Sorry - rant over. It really is a good story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story. I tried to make the language as British as I could, but at the end of the day I'm an American who only knows American slang and doesn't even know anyone British. I'm sorry I've offended you! It's simply the best I could do.
Reviewer: Ddopps1296
Date: 04/01/11 16:24
Chapter: The Epilogue
I read this in a 9 hour car ride. It actually made sitting in the car enjoyable.
Author's Response: I'm glad I could make your ride a little better! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 03/03/11 18:32
Chapter: The Epilogue
You gave weight to a character that I don't think any of us ever considered much and now we'll never see her the same way again. I cried in some parts, definently. You're a master and I applaud this fanfiction!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's very sweet of you to say :)
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath
Woohoo! James,you lucky bastard! I'm putting you on my favorite authors list,(Take pride in knowing you'll be the first!) And this story on my fav stories list. Along with I'll Pick You Up
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here
Bravo,Brava,Um....I'm not sure if theres another word for that. Heres my personal form of that:Fucking epic. Straight up. You are definitely my favorite author on this website,I'll Pick You Up and this(Someone To Watch Over Me) are my favorite stories on this website.(SO far,I've only read about 9 stories..lol Even if,can you email me copies of those 2? Blinkdawg15@yahoo.com) Thank you for being such an awesome writer!
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening
Really important chapter,abd a really good one.
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 28: What Happens Next
Romancey! Woohoo! Go James! Sirius,Mess them Death Eaters up!!!
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 12:59
Chapter: Chapter 27: When It Rains, It Pours
Yet again. 0.0 is all i can say.
Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 12:16
Chapter: Chapter 26: Comfortably Numb, part 2
Damn,THAT was what i call one helluva cliffhanger.