Reviewer: LovePrevails
Date: 01/06/14 18:21
Chapter: Prologue

Okay so I literally made an account on this site so I could review this story.
I love it. It's the best James/Lily I've ever read. You have the characters spot on, the writing is exceptional, and the story grabs you, holds you there by the scruff of your neck and doesn't let go until the very end. I just needed to express my gratitude to you for creating this wonderful piece of writing.
Thank you.

Reviewer: hallowseeker
Date: 11/30/13 4:57
Chapter: The Epilogue

Here's my first ever review on this site, and apologies for only doing a review for the last chapter. Though mind you, I also couldn't bare the thought of NOT leaving a review because this fan fiction was absolutely brilliant! It had it's funny, sad, romantic, and adventurous moments. I really loved the additional plot you had with the kidnapping idea, and of course I adored all of the Lily and James moments (I'm finding quite a common pattern that James Potter is quite perfect and adorable in all fan fictions written by various authors; wish all girls could all find their 'James Potter' lol).

All of the cliffhangers and climax were outstanding, as well as the small glimpses of hints that led to explanations further along in the story. I can see you planned it out very well!

I especially loved your writing, that you didn't try to cram the entire story into a few chapters, but rather, letting it reach where it would naturally end, all of your descriptions, and seriously good character development. You'll make an excellent author if you ever decide to become one :)

Of course the Harry Potter series is geniously written itself, but your fan fiction and a couple of others have really caused my attachment towards the Marauders and Lily (and Emma too!), which, for obvious reasons, aren't too heavily focused on in the Harry Potter books. So you can understand that the epilogue just broke my heart including the death of many of my favourite characters and the lonliness experienced by Sirius, Remus, Emma, and Harry himself. :(

P.S. I'm so glad there's no word limit on this

Reviewer: GreenEyesLoveNeverDies
Date: 01/01/13 16:59
Chapter: The Epilogue

god this is killing me especially since I'm listening to Canon in D

Reviewer: CatchtheSnitch
Date: 07/14/12 15:04
Chapter: The Epilogue

Completely in love with this whole story. The plot you came up with was just fantastic, and I absolutely love your characters and the arguments and the fluff and....well, everything is great. You're a really wonderful writer, and I'm going to strive to write as well as you do. Great job!

Reviewer: Felix Felicis_potter fan
Date: 06/18/12 17:05
Chapter: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

THAT WAS AWESOME

Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/16/12 10:16
Chapter: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon

I can't get onto this chapter! It won't let me read anymore :'( i click on the chapter and then it says the warning thingy and i click on continue and it just goes back to the chapter page! ive tried leaving it, and going onto it from a different page and going from the previous chapter but i cant get on to any of it xx i think its coz its 6 - 7th years :( any tips? i really need help! thank you x

Reviewer: CarnivorousYaxley
Date: 06/15/12 18:20
Chapter: Chapter 2: An Emotional and Mental State

Another fabulous chapter :) i read this about a year ago and wanted to read it again xx been looking for it for about 3 months! you have no idea how happy i am that i can read it again! :)

Reviewer: zlm20
Date: 06/15/12 13:00
Chapter: Prologue

Just wanted to say, you are the only author I have right now on my Favorites, which obviously means your a good writer! I luv this story. Best on MuggleNet by far!!!!!

Reviewer: Chanichani
Date: 06/14/12 17:12
Chapter: The Epilogue

That was the best story EVER!!!!!!!! Though the epilogue is a little sad, well very sad. But I loved it anyway! But why, oh why, did you have to kill emma!!!! She was my favorite character!!!!!

Reviewer: zlm20
Date: 06/10/12 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

I Adore this story!!! This is the story I read when I want something familiar and terrific to read. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: TheInvisibilityCloakOwner
Date: 03/11/12 12:18
Chapter: The Epilogue

Really, I Have Absolutely No Words In Description :)
Your A Wonderful Writer MagEd.

Reviewer: ginnys_little_sister
Date: 12/01/11 23:58
Chapter: The Epilogue

When I first started reading this story, you had not finished it yet. I think it only to chapter 16 at the time! But it always stayed with me, I always remember it, and wanted to read it again. And finally 2 days ago I came back on mugglenet from another fan fiction site and really wanted to read this story, but I didn't know what the name was..... But I saw the title read the little description, thought it might be it. When I started reading the first chapter I knew it was it! I was so happy to finally have found it! I was even happier to know that it was completed!
Thank you so much!
It was an amazing story! I absolutely loved it!

Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 08/02/11 16:30
Chapter: The Epilogue

Wow what an exciting story! I think my favourite part was Sirius insisting that James and Lily had eloped!

And, in reference to my previous review, you did not offend me! I'm sorry if I made it sound that way, I just felt I had to point a few things out! I can tell alot of fans on here are American - its nice to know you in the states love Potter so much!

Great work, though I'm glad I read it after it was completed. I might even check out some of your other stuff.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: bekki-unknown
Date: 08/01/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 6: Cooties

Hey I'm really enjoying this story so far! I think James' plan is a clever twist, keeps things interesting! I also think the darkness bits are good, they make me enjoy the fluffy romantic bits more!

However, speaking as a British person I have to object to the word "cooties". I have never heard anyone British use it; I don't even know what it means (though I can take a guess)! You impressed me when you used "primary school", but being a picky, and rather proud Brit, I feel that I have to point out that James or anyone at Hogwarts would have used that word!

Sorry - rant over. It really is a good story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the story. I tried to make the language as British as I could, but at the end of the day I'm an American who only knows American slang and doesn't even know anyone British. I'm sorry I've offended you! It's simply the best I could do.

Reviewer: Ddopps1296
Date: 04/01/11 16:24
Chapter: The Epilogue

I read this in a 9 hour car ride. It actually made sitting in the car enjoyable.

Author's Response: I'm glad I could make your ride a little better! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 03/03/11 18:32
Chapter: The Epilogue

You gave weight to a character that I don't think any of us ever considered much and now we'll never see her the same way again. I cried in some parts, definently. You're a master and I applaud this fanfiction!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's very sweet of you to say :)

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Woohoo! James,you lucky bastard! I'm putting you on my favorite authors list,(Take pride in knowing you'll be the first!) And this story on my fav stories list. Along with I'll Pick You Up

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 30: The End's Not Near; It's Here

Bravo,Brava,Um....I'm not sure if theres another word for that. Heres my personal form of that:Fucking epic. Straight up. You are definitely my favorite author on this website,I'll Pick You Up and this(Someone To Watch Over Me) are my favorite stories on this website.(SO far,I've only read about 9 stories..lol Even if,can you email me copies of those 2? Blinkdawg15@yahoo.com) Thank you for being such an awesome writer!

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 29: This Is Really Happening

Really important chapter,abd a really good one.

Reviewer: Blinkdawg
Date: 02/06/11 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 28: What Happens Next

Romancey! Woohoo! Go James! Sirius,Mess them Death Eaters up!!!

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