that's all??? more, more, more
Author's Response: I'll be adding more soon.
i like the direction this story is going, keep it up, the whole artist/ moel fantasy is rerly used these days.
Author's Response: Not enough creativity I guess. People just have him a jock and she some indignant prat or something. That's why I don't read too much of these sort of fics, [the ship].
That was really cute. I liked taht James has some kind of talent other than Quidditch . . . it's different thatn normal. I didn't really understand why Wormtail was there at the end though. That kind of confused me. Besides that, very good.
Author's Response: I find that writing people who don't have much to do is dull. I remember that in OotP he was drawing a snitch, and that gave me the idea to have him be an artist. *I had Peter in it? Huh? I forget if I put him in...*
hmm intresting perspective. i like it. the whole drawing thing. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: double post!
hmm intresting perspective. i like it. the whole drawing thing. cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, most people don't give James much credit... He's not all that JK puts out for us I think.
Ooh yes! You're on the right track. You know , well begun & all that. I like this new reasonable Lily. Its an interesting new slant on Lily's usual " I hate and only hate James. "
Author's Response: Yeah... I think that she doesn't hate James completely. I think that she just doesn't like him when he's acting like a little kid. She seems like she's more mature than people's usual take on her. Thanks.
I really like this idea. It's a bit different. :) I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: I like writing things that are different. I'm really glad that you like it.
I love Lily/James fics and have read a million of them--so trust me when I tell you this is excellent! I'm excited to read more.
Author's Response: This is my first one ever... gee... I feel so honoured...
Cute! That was really unique and adorable! Can't wait for more! And perfect spelling!
Author's Response: really, people keep on telling me that I've got something wrong. But thanks. This is a first...
aww its cute update soon
Author's Response: I will most certianly.
Excellent. Keep going!
Author's Response: I will.
That was really good! Some parts were slightly confusing and needed re-reading, but on the whole, a great fic, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
