This was so cool, I love Tonks! And I've always seen what Dumbledore did as a little off since reading DH. Why is it that the people we trust in when we're small turn out to be as flawed as the rest of the human race? It was so odd watching Snape being more actively concerned for Harry than Dumbledore too. Excellent fic!
that was one of the most ridiculous things I have ever read....
Awesome story you've got going there,please update soon!!!!
Wow! Poor Harry, though. I like it, I want more!
Oh my gosh. That's a powerful ending. Now I'm going to say something I never thought I'd say about anything: I think this plot line makes a better one-shot than a full length fanfic. I've read full length fanfics like this, and they always seem a little out of character. Ending it there solves that problem completely. Good Job. You get a gold star.
Please write another chapter.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, this is a one-shot, which means there will be no more chapters. I'm glad you liked it enough to want to see more, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers, ~*~LIZ
wow. I've never seen Dumbledore portrayed in such a 'Cornelious Fudge' manner. That was really a skillful piece of writing, I really enjoyed read it =)
wow. I've never seen Dumbledore portrayed in such a 'Cornelious Fudge' manner. That was really a skillful piece of writing, I really enjoyed read it =)
Ha! Good for them! Man... this is just a one-shot? That stinks, it could be a really good summer-after-fifth-year fic... Oh, well. Good job. An attention-getter at best!
~Moony :)
i loved this story.
for some reason, i think we all have feel that sick pleasure in knowing that dumbledore did something wrong. maybe its because he hardly ever makes mistakes and always seems to be the perfect role model and such.
but anyway, i thought this story was very good. i love stories about harry getting hurt by the dursleys because it makes him seem more human. (but i do love harry to death and don't want him to die or anything). i thought you did characterizations very well because i would think the order would be really mad at dumbledore because harry's just a teen.
definitley one of my favorites.
Um... okay. It wasn't badly written, but the plot seemed kind of... pointless? I dunno. It just made me hate Dumbledore even more than I already do. I think you ahould write more. It seems like a weird place to end.
YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER! please please please please please!
i don't have enough imagination to think of what bones will do...well, i do, but im too lazy to use it. =]
o and also love the ending absolutley briliant ending your a great writer
wow i mean wow a bit un harry potter ish since they could mend his cuts and tht in seconds but very touching and i love the gang up on dumbledore even snape seemed to root for harry well written and vernon deserved wot dung gave him
but come on i know you said oneshot but please this could make a great few chapters which i would love to read
9/10 well done
EHMYGAWD you need another chappie (chapter). like about....if harry lives (ibet he will, but still) what Bones does.....
Wait,I have a question (well 2)
1 - why wasen't Kingsley there? he is a member of the order.???
2 - why were people following Harry again??
Author's Response: 1. I didn't mention every Order member by name. 2. Er... why not? This is something that confused me quite a bit about HBP - Voldemort's still around, so why on earth was Harry's guard gone? Sorry, but this is a one-shot only. Harry DOES live, of course, and as for what Bones does - use your imagination. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers, ~*~LIZ
what?? that wasn't very believable. and confusing too - you should have spent a little more time on setting the scene. and everyone was too OOC, especially neville.
