Reviews For Your Final Breath
Reviewer: brains and beauty
Date: 05/07/07 4:45
Chapter: A Constant Vigil


Reviewer: blue_eye_blound
Date: 02/19/07 13:02
Chapter: A Constant Vigil

That was so sad but SO beutiful at the same time! I wanted to cry! I loved it all the same though.

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 11/10/06 22:09
Chapter: A Constant Vigil

this is very interesting. Actually, what i thought was that it was hermione who had fallen in love w/harry and ron was reading the diary to her. Except for the red hair part, that confused me. But i get it now :), it just took me a while. Keep writing.

Reviewer: Silver_Quill
Date: 09/19/06 22:34
Chapter: A Constant Vigil

Hated? As in hated that she was in love with him, or what? Awesome story anyway, keep writing!


Author's Response: Yep, you're exactly right. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 09/15/06 19:10
Chapter: A Constant Vigil

omg this is so sad!! but i still love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I was trying to see if it would make me cry!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 09/15/06 14:05
Chapter: A Constant Vigil

wow that was so sad, it was written so well, but i dont undersatnd the last line, whos reading it?

Author's Response: Well, at the start you hear the thoughts of a man (any man, just the man Ginny is now with), then it's Ginnys Diary entry then it's the man speaking again. I hope this clears things up and thank you bringing this to my attention, I'll try and make it so it's easier to understand. Thanks! :)

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