Reviewer: Hatusu
Date: 08/02/07 23:59
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

Ooh, very nice, I loved this piece, especially the bit about Neville and the bubblegum wrapper.

This is brilliant, but I think it would be wise to mention in your author's note that this was based off of the equally brilliant novel The Things They Carried, by Tim O'Brien. Because otherwise it would seem as if you were taking credit for an idea that wasn't originally yours. :)

Keep writing, you are amazing!

Reviewer: zotius_221
Date: 07/03/07 20:58
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

Wow, that was amazing. It really was a beautiful story. I'm wondering though, is it based off the book The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien?

Reviewer: zotius_221
Date: 07/03/07 20:57
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

Wow, that was amazing. It really was a beautiful story. I'm wondering though, is it based off the book The Things They Carried by Tim O'Brien?

Reviewer: Silver Apocalypse
Date: 03/08/07 12:04
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

Excellent. Bloody Brilliant. Another breaktaing, awe inspiring fic from the one and only SecretKeeper! You're right, people, everyone, really does carry around heavy burdens, but underneath that they carry the most important they need to continue to perserve through those burdens: love. awesome, once again. 10/10

Reviewer: the fetal positon
Date: 11/12/06 19:52
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

My gosh, this story is absolutely breath taking. How can you write so beautifully? This is by far the best one-shot that I've read in a long time; it's definitely going into my favorites, which already holds you as an author and some of your other stories. I'm fascinated by your writing, it makes me want to get better. Well done, VERY well done!

Reviewer: doorknobs
Date: 09/19/06 12:18
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

This story was absolutly FANTASTIC!! You write very well. Well Done.

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 09/16/06 23:38
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

That was great!!!! I like that this was told in Remus's point of view!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!! I can't wait for your new chapter for Avenged Sevenfold!!!! voted for you for the Quicksiver thing, for *GRR* the non-canon catogory!!!!!! I hope you win!!! You deserve it!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 09/16/06 9:35
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

I loved it! I think it was a very realistic picture on what war does to the people in the middle of it all.

Keep on keepin' on!! :-)

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 09/15/06 16:31
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

I loved it! I think it's a very real picture of war, and the burden it puts on the people in the middle of it all. :-)

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 09/15/06 16:21
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

I know a story is beyond beautiful when I stop breathing. I just remembered to breathe.
Thank you-
Daisy

Reviewer: shimotsuki
Date: 09/15/06 13:15
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

A powerful story -- a very good read. The atmosphere of the Order at war is chilling, and the different perspectives taken on the lists of "things they carried" gives the story a very effective sense of symmetry.

Reviewer: taal
Date: 09/15/06 0:34
Chapter: The Things They Carry (One-Shot)

This was really well done, and incredibly insightful... I liked it a lot. The image of Arthur throwing out his plugs really hit me, actually.

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