Reviews For Underneath It All
Reviewer: My Wicked Quill
Date: 09/12/09 12:24
Chapter: Underneath It All

SOOO GOOD!! I WANT MORE!!

Reviewer: babut
Date: 09/28/06 18:29
Chapter: Underneath It All

There were a few spelling and grammatical things, but it's very well done. I feel like the H/G relationship needs some more definition. Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens!

Author's Response: Oh, it seems like there are always errors I need to fix! lol I'm not sure when I'm continuing on with UNitA, I still need to finish up my first venture into FF. But thanks for the heads up, babut! ~Patrony :)

Reviewer: Queen97
Date: 09/19/06 18:00
Chapter: Underneath It All

u figured out who it was?

Author's Response: I'm not really sure what or whom you're referring to. Mundungus? R.A.B.? Anyway, thanks for reading! ~Patrony :)

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