SOOO GOOD!! I WANT MORE!!
There were a few spelling and grammatical things, but it's very well done. I feel like the H/G relationship needs some more definition. Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens!
Author's Response: Oh, it seems like there are always errors I need to fix! lol I'm not sure when I'm continuing on with UNitA, I still need to finish up my first venture into FF. But thanks for the heads up, babut! ~Patrony :)
u figured out who it was?
Author's Response: I'm not really sure what or whom you're referring to. Mundungus? R.A.B.? Anyway, thanks for reading! ~Patrony :)