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Name: hpreader1 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 19:54 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
You can't blame Harry there. It would be awkward going your whole life with people gawking at you every minute.


Name: aberforthlovesgoats (Signed) · Date: 03/11/08 23:35 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
This is one of my favorite fics, ever!


Name: Fantasium (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 18:14 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
*grins* Oh, I love this. This is why I read fanfic Ė so that once in a while, I will stumble over a gem like this one.

Iím not sure of where to begin. This is an exquisite piece, and Iím afraid that the only criticism I could provide would be to check some typos and missing blank spaces, but I wonít waste your time with that. If you wanted to correct such tiny details, Iím sure that lots of good betas would be willing to work with the kind of story you have here. When randomly browsing through categories I have learned not to expect too much Ė and then this appears, and itís pure quality.

Well, letís begin with your language. I glanced at your profile and there you tell us that your first language actually is French Ė well, then I can only compliment you all the more for having, and making such spectacular use of, such an extensive vocabulary. You write with an incredible flow and I didnít spot a single sentence that didnít merge seamlessly with the next. Reading this was almost like listening to a piece of instrumental music; the basic tones are so excellent that a song, a story, is almost unnecessary.

That said Ė I wouldnít have wanted to miss out on this story! Itís simple, but in a good sense. Some authors might have been tempted to go into lengthy explanations about why Harry has been cut off from the magical world, but you just let us wonder, and I will confess that Iím mightily intrigued! :) Instead, you not only focus on Malcolm Talbot (what a well-picked name, by the way), but you actually tell the story from his point of view, giving us a very interesting picture of Harry.

Ah, your descriptions, of both characters and settings Ė I feel like I could go on reading them forever. For my taste, you provide the perfect amount of detail to paint a shiny picture of scenery and emotion. You never overdo it, but manage to let me see, feel, and be a part of what youíre writing.

The ending is surprisingly well done, too. Not that I didnít expect it to be good, but it can be difficult to pull off a satisfying ending to something like this. But youíve put Malcolm on the Hogwartís Express, excited as he should be and with a new-found friend next to him. Sort of a full circle there, and itís a nice feeling. That is, until you let Malcolm learn what has happened to Harry Ė but not us! Itís frustrating, itís mysterious, Iím longing to know, and yet the story feels finished and complete. Iím not sure how you do it; I might have to read over your story a few more times, but in an case itís very, very well done.

Now, thereís nothing left for me to say but thank you Ė thank you for sharing such a lovely piece of fanfiction!


Name: hpfreak101 (Signed) · Date: 02/23/07 9:19 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
This was totally awesome. Great job!


Name: later (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 8:07 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
i quite simply loved it. please continue i don't feel like this story is over yet. good job and good luck. cheers!


Name: later (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 8:06 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
i quite simply loved it. please continue i don't feel like this story is over yet. good job and good luck. cheers!


Name: later (Signed) · Date: 12/18/06 8:06 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
i quite simply loved it. please continue i don't feel like this story is over yet. good job and good luck. cheers!


Name: Saffron91 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/06 1:25 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
wow! this was *omg* super fantasical!! So basically, i love you and this is going on my fav's right now!
XD
peace!
saffy


Name: FanFicFanatic12 (Signed) · Date: 09/24/06 20:07 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
Cool plot. I really felt how Malcolm was feeling, and got into the story. It's always a little weird seeing Harry from another character's prosepective, but you did and awesome job. :-)


Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 09/24/06 14:09 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
that was great! i wonder why harry went like that.... Really well written!


Name: secret_lover (Signed) · Date: 09/23/06 0:47 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
WOW~! i like it!!!


Name: phoenix_trills (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 22:12 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
That was really good. I love all your stories! Haha. Red hair... Ron and Hermione's little girl...? =]


Name: ginnyp_harryp (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 16:25 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
cute!
although harry/ginny would have been nice...
lol


Name: Magical_Lily (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 15:12 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
This is really good.
I bet that red headed girl is a weasley.
Can't wait for more:D


Name: sirius_rox (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 15:01 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
hmm was the red-head a weasley by chance? ron n hermione's? lol.. sorry, but when i think red hair, i can't help but think weasley, lol... very good story.. really enjoyed it ;)


Name: charmer (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 10:38 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
I really enjoyed this story. I think it still has a lot of potential to be more. i hope that someday you will expand on this idea. This story could go so many ways.
The Charmer


Name: HermionePotter (Signed) · Date: 09/20/06 9:50 · For: The Man from Adian Avenue
This was... different... realistic... not something i had expected! I like it!


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