As i read this poem and your other store Alone i cant help but cry. and i dont cry but these stories moved me so much that i broke down. They are so beautiful i praise you for your writing
Hi, its me again. I cant stop reading this poem, it rocks!!! I was just wondering if you would like to beta my story. I will email, but could you please author respond first? You rock, Gabby!
PS- I am also a beauty who survived a breakdown :P
Author's Response: Could you e-mail me with details about your story? like how many chapters it will be and what genre and such? I'm glad you like the poem, and YAY for survivors.
You are cruel... You know that, right? I think that we, at least, as faithful readers (whatever) should have the right to know who's point of view this is from. Now I have to guess. (but you hate guessing games!)
Ginny? (no, you dolt - maybe you should try reading the story first?)
Oh - right.
The concience won.
~Juli
Author's Response: Well, if you knew whose point of view this was from, it would ruin Alone! Is this review good or bad? Either way... thanks for the review!
This is the first bit of poetry I've read from you, and I have to say: Nice!!! Love it so much! Almost as much as the actual fic...scratch that, AS much as the actual fic. Your word choice is wonderful, and I love the rhythm to it. My only critique is that a few lines don't seem to quite pertain to what the narrator is saying...ah well, still really brilliant.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. And the thought of it being AS good as the story means one of two things... a crappy story or a good poem... I'll take the second choice. :D
Wow. First Impression... very powerful, yet simple. That's what makes it real. It feels like someone's actual thoughts and feelings.
I'm stuck on who's POV this is, though. :> You gonna tell me? lol...
Or is there a hint in here?
10/10!
*grumbles* I'm jealous. ATTN: EVERYONE: I, ME, I actually wrote this.. ahem... I have poetic talent.. *cough* really...
Author's Response: No, I won't tell you who's POV it's from... it's signifigant to the story... It will be obvious later on... I hope... *makes a face* Yes, everyone, I lied... Brier Rose actually wrote this *eyerolls* Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
WHY DOESNT THIS HAVE ANY REVIEWS?!??!?! It was amazing! Hint: Go over your authors note: you spelled something wrong.
Author's Response: Yay!!! First review!!! *headdesk because of spelling error* Thanks for that. Thanks for the review!!! I'm glad you liked it!
