Reviews For Someone Help Me
Reviewer: chasitie black
Date: 02/10/13 16:18
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

You are such a great author

Reviewer: Gagaoverginny
Date: 04/30/11 15:02
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

As i read this poem and your other store Alone i cant help but cry. and i dont cry but these stories moved me so much that i broke down. They are so beautiful i praise you for your writing

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 07/18/07 8:34
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

Hi, its me again. I cant stop reading this poem, it rocks!!! I was just wondering if you would like to beta my story. I will email, but could you please author respond first? You rock, Gabby!

PS- I am also a beauty who survived a breakdown :P

Author's Response: Could you e-mail me with details about your story? like how many chapters it will be and what genre and such? I'm glad you like the poem, and YAY for survivors.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 0:49
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

You are cruel... You know that, right? I think that we, at least, as faithful readers (whatever) should have the right to know who's point of view this is from. Now I have to guess. (but you hate guessing games!)

Ginny? (no, you dolt - maybe you should try reading the story first?)

Oh - right.

The concience won.


Author's Response: Well, if you knew whose point of view this was from, it would ruin Alone! Is this review good or bad? Either way... thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/13/06 22:33
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

This is the first bit of poetry I've read from you, and I have to say: Nice!!! Love it so much! Almost as much as the actual fic...scratch that, AS much as the actual fic. Your word choice is wonderful, and I love the rhythm to it. My only critique is that a few lines don't seem to quite pertain to what the narrator is saying...ah well, still really brilliant.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. And the thought of it being AS good as the story means one of two things... a crappy story or a good poem... I'll take the second choice. :D

Reviewer: BrierRose17
Date: 09/13/06 22:27
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

Wow. First Impression... very powerful, yet simple. That's what makes it real. It feels like someone's actual thoughts and feelings.

I'm stuck on who's POV this is, though. :> You gonna tell me? lol...

Or is there a hint in here?


*grumbles* I'm jealous. ATTN: EVERYONE: I, ME, I actually wrote this.. ahem... I have poetic talent.. *cough* really...

Author's Response: No, I won't tell you who's POV it's from... it's signifigant to the story... It will be obvious later on... I hope... *makes a face* Yes, everyone, I lied... Brier Rose actually wrote this *eyerolls* Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 09/13/06 17:05
Chapter: Mirrored Pain

WHY DOESNT THIS HAVE ANY REVIEWS?!??!?! It was amazing! Hint: Go over your authors note: you spelled something wrong.

Author's Response: Yay!!! First review!!! *headdesk because of spelling error* Thanks for that. Thanks for the review!!! I'm glad you liked it!

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