Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/05/06 4:15
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

More, more, MORE! NOW! Awsome, except the time period that they were gone isn't correct, but otherwise, it's great! The Godric's Hollow sequence and dialogues were almost as it says in the books, great job!

Reviewer: faolan63
Date: 11/05/06 0:17
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

That was amazing.
This is so good, I wish it was the real book. It's really well put together, and it's believable.
You've done a great job.

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 11/04/06 23:52
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

that was great...

Reviewer: potterfan97
Date: 11/04/06 20:41
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

This is a fabulous story. Please keep it up!!!

Reviewer: weasles0711
Date: 11/04/06 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 20: Godric's Hollow

Brilliant. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: mrCONSTANTvigilance
Date: 11/01/06 19:25
Chapter: Chapter 20: Godric's Hollow

I just want to start out by saying how much i have enjoyed reading After The Summer Ended. the story line was down right fantastic. it took a while to get used to reading it in not only harry's point of view, but ron's and hermione's as well. but once i got used to it i loved it. can't wait till you update. the story was awesome... keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/01/06 8:08
Chapter: Chapter 20: Godric's Hollow

When somebody uses a time turner they dont lose the time, you know. They will be back at the same moment they left, and nobody will miss them. Therefore it's wrong that Gred and Forge is gone for two months and noone can find them, and also that Romione isn't where Harry left them when he comes back.

Thank you for updating so often! Love the story!

Author's Response: I thought about that - but then I thought it only worked that way if they came back to the exact time that they disappeared, & since F & G actually came back 2 months later, that meant they'd been gone for the 2 months. Then I wasn't sure...& then I got confused & just left it because it worked out better for my plot to have them missing. Glad you like the story!

Reviewer: tear_away
Date: 10/31/06 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 20: Godric's Hollow

You know i hate it when i finish reading one of your chapters, because i know it will be days before i read the next one.

Excelent as usual ,all though i am worried about Hermione. I have two guesses at what has happened to her, it will be fun waiting to see if i am right or not.

Reviewer: captain_murphy13
Date: 10/29/06 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 19: The Time Turner

I love your story. It was the first one I read when I joined the site. It's great that you update so quickly when all my other favorites average about one a month.

Reviewer: secret_lover
Date: 10/24/06 18:07
Chapter: Going Home

LOL i just found you on HPFF... YAY lol i get to read ahead!

Reviewer: georgiegirl15
Date: 10/23/06 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 18: Hufflepuff's Cup

keep up th good work. Plot interesting, characters good. enjoying story

Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 10/23/06 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 18: Hufflepuff's Cup

i love your use of dialogue, it does a good job of strengthening your charatcher,

Reviewer: NiGHTS
Date: 10/23/06 16:37
Chapter: Chapter 18: Hufflepuff's Cup

Loving this one sand_dollar; first story I've read on here (& I've read a LOT of them) which is offering so many realistic possibilities as to how Book 7 might actually go. Keep up the sterling work, you have a new fan in me but I reckon there are plenty of us hooked on this one now, and we'll be impatiently waiting on every chapter !!!

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 10/23/06 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 18: Hufflepuff's Cup

Oh I just adore this story! Really, the way you write is just -- wow! I love the Dobby-sequence, it's very similar to how he is in the books, good job! Not everyone can make their characters do what they want to without going all OOC.

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 10/20/06 15:04
Chapter: Chapter 17: Aberforth

amazing as ever.

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/19/06 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Wedding

Ooh... A beautiful chapter. Another, that is. I loved the bit on love potions... Wonderful addition, sparking mystery - Superb.


Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/19/06 19:42
Chapter: Going Home

Ooh.... This was spectacular. Simply fabulous. A long chapter - very long - but lots of progress made, and an excellent, excellent take on Book 7. I love the twists - I can't begin to name them all, bu eems as though I'm almost reading Book 7, except for the first person. But that only adds to the experience. Amazing! Bravissima!


Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 10/18/06 11:35
Chapter: Chapter 16: Christmas in the Chamber

wow. amazing yet again. you certainly did your homework on this. you write with style!

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 10/12/06 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 14: Mr. & Mrs. Granger

great chapter!

Reviewer: Domilu
Date: 10/12/06 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 14: Mr. & Mrs. Granger

I hope Hermione's Parents make it trough, at least alive.
As I’ve always said every chapter is as well or even better than previous.

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