Reviewer: krisy410
Date: 11/13/06 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

Oh my god i cannot wait till you finish this story it is AMAZING!! I love all the twists that you put in it. After i read this i went to read the fifth harry potter book and i found where you got molly's twin brothers, i can't believe you thought of all that stuff. Its like your story is coming from jk rowling herself, i love it!

Reviewer: KalHoNaaHo
Date: 11/12/06 12:07
Chapter: Chapter 8: A Visit From An Auror

*squee*


*double squee*


I can't help it!! I love the Ron/Hermione to pieces!! *dies*


Yes, so anyway, I'm Kal, and I've just discovered your little treasure here and have to say that it's absolutely marvelous. I couldn't stop reading to leave a review until just now. I have an odd penchant for Year 7 fics, but I can rarely find one that meets my standards. Yours, wll, is very much in the spirit of Jo's installments, and I am thoroughly enoying it. It's got a lovely unique plot - the rendez-vous with Malfoy was ingenius (though I was a bit skeptical about him fancying Hermione and how Ron could have picked up on that).


That's another thing I love about your fic. Ron. I love Ron in general, but I especially love a well-written Ron, and it seems to me that you have him down pat. He's got brains, for one, but he still endearingly despises looking through books, and yet, when it comes to something he's passionate about, he's very motivated. I love the Ron/Hermione moments, and the fact that they're not perfect and do leave Harry feeling a bit out-of-the-loop at times. Your characters in general are very well-balanced and they really contribute to your fic.


Thank you so much for writing this!! I'm excited to continue reading!


Kal ;)

Reviewer: baby b
Date: 11/12/06 11:05
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

wicked i think this story is ace i cant wait to read the rest of the story so plz hurry and rite it

Reviewer: Domaris
Date: 11/12/06 9:24
Chapter: Going Home

I just read this and I must say it's an awesome story so far. You've really got me addicted.

There are a few points that have been nagging me ever since I read them, though. I can't wait to see if there'll be more to it. The vows in the book changing when Harry reads them, for exemple. Auntie Muriel and the necklace kind of seem suspicious to me also.

Update soon! please :)

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/12/06 4:07
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

OOOhhhh! This IS book 7. Are you related to Jo? Maybe you are her? You write fantastically anyway! I'm amazed!
Cliffie! How could Snape? I always thought he was a bad guy!

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 11/11/06 22:33
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

I have just finished reading this from the beginning and have been enjoying it immensely. Please hurry and finish it!!

Reviewer: weasles0711
Date: 11/11/06 9:06
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

Wow. WOOOOW. Please update soon. I am entirely addicted to your story!

Reviewer: hbwallflower
Date: 11/10/06 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 23: The Hogwarts Express

Update soon please, I hate cliff hangers!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 11/10/06 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 22: New Year's Eve

Oh. My. God! This is sooo good! I spent all today reading it - it is fantastic. You are teh best writer, I can just imagine book 7 being exactly like this! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: griffenraven
Date: 11/10/06 12:16
Chapter: Going Home

This is a really great story! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: olivia_weasley
Date: 11/08/06 9:15
Chapter: Chapter 22: New Year's Eve

Another wonderful chapter! I really love this story so far. Keep up the excellent work.

Reviewer: hbwallflower
Date: 11/08/06 1:11
Chapter: Chapter 22: New Year's Eve

Can't wait for the next update! That rhymes...

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/07/06 23:57
Chapter: Chapter 22: New Year's Eve

Oh and who was that woman? And is Hermione really pregnant? If so, I expect she would know by now. And this mindreading cancome inquite handy! Nice!

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 11/07/06 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 22: New Year's Eve

OOOooo!!!! Clifflie=D

Reviewer: hbwallflower
Date: 11/07/06 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

Truthfully the best fan fiction I have ever read, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: sweetest_x_sin
Date: 11/07/06 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

i love this story

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 11/07/06 12:09
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

i've said it before and i'll say it again, this story was sooooo fabby.

as usual....:)

Reviewer: lily rose
Date: 11/07/06 12:08
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

i've said it before and i'll say it again, this story was sooooo fabby.

as usual....:)

Reviewer: Dani Marie
Date: 11/05/06 15:57
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

Each chapter gets better and better! I love your story!
Update soon!

Reviewer: NiGHTS
Date: 11/05/06 6:59
Chapter: Chapter 21: Halloween, Sixteen Years Ago

Geat chapter, sand_dollar. This is building up towards some enticingly intruiging confrontations and resolutions; I, for one, "really" want to see what happens when Harry and Snape come together again. The whole Hermione situation is well-crafted, also. I think the best authors on the site have the courage to include interesting side-stories alongside their over-arching plot and it's good to see it done so ably and confidently.

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