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Name: danbarn (Signed) · Date: 12/14/06 20:50 · For: Going Home
I really have to say this is an amazingly well thought out story. I read and reread and rereread it all 3 times in the last 2 days, and with its lenght that is somewhat of an accomplishment but it keeps me getting through finals. The plot is so tight, detail oriented and rich it could easily mistake this for JKR's work if it was written in a slightly more british style for a slightly younger age group. I love the roatating POV and I also love how you developed both Ron and Hermonie so well, finding a good way to accelerate their relationship and the positive effects their marriage have on eachother. One thing I get frusterated with some writers even JKR though I suspect she is doing what you are at a slower pace is the development of Ron in particular. He is a much more talented wizard that most would think in my poinion and just needs the confidene of having his love of hirmone expressed and returned in order to become a great wizard, no Harry mind you but a big cut above your average wizard.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Cheers,
Dan

PS without a doubt my favorite fanfic in the general section and either my first or second fav orverall, keep up the excellent work!


Name: danbarn (Signed) · Date: 12/14/06 20:49 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
I really have to say this is an amazingly well thought out story. I read and reread and rereread it all 3 times in the last 2 days, and with its lenght that is somewhat of an accomplishment but it keeps me getting through finals. The plot is so tight, detail oriented and rich it could easily mistake this for JKR's work if it was written in a slightly more british style for a slightly younger age group. I love the roatating POV and I also love how you developed both Ron and Hermonie so well, finding a good way to accelerate their relationship and the positive effects their marriage have on eachother. One thing I get frusterated with some writers even JKR though I suspect she is doing what you are at a slower pace is the development of Ron in particular. He is a much more talented wizard that most would think in my poinion and just needs the confidene of having his love of hirmone expressed and returned in order to become a great wizard, no Harry mind you but a big cut above your average wizard.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Cheers,
Dan


Name: alicepotter (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 8:01 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
I love this story!! If someone told me this was the plot of book 7, I would believe them! You have done a really good job so far! I like the different POVs, too.

Great work! Keep the chapters coming!!


Name: niffler trainer (Signed) · Date: 12/13/06 7:54 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
That was a great chapter! I loved it! Pretty pretty pppplllllleeeeaaaasssseee update!


Name: bmn (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 22:19 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Great Chapter, great Fanfic


Name: georgiegirl15 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 17:03 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Good few chapters. Continuing to enjoy story.


Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 15:16 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Nice chapter. Maybe some more H/G romance though... it's my favorite


Name: chocofrog90 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 13:54 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Great chapter


Name: declan06 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 13:00 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
I love this story. I think it is the first I read in the first person. it is a very intresting idea.


Name: Harlequin Rundfunk (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 12:58 · For: Going Home
Bravo!


Name: HJPCATI (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 12:36 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Ah! I am DYING for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: GreenMan1966 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 12:34 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Wow, this is getting really good. I definitely think that last bit - the conversation between Harry & Hermione - was very well written. Whew! I'm sorta misty-eyed!


Name: chocofrog90 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/06 15:45 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
PLEASE validate!!!!!!!!!!


Name: Harlequin Rundfunk (Signed) · Date: 12/10/06 23:42 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
This valdiation is taking a rediculously long time


Name: kelly_58 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/06 11:49 · For: Chapter 28: The Final Seal
ooooh! wow! your story is absolutly amazing so far! i really love how you tell it by the trio's point of views! oh! please, please update soon! i'm gonna die of boredom if i have nothing to read, and trust me, your story's far better then anything else i've read on here! i wonder what mrs. figg wants to tell harry and how dobby's doing. oh, he's so cute i love dobby so much.
P.S please update.
P.P.S UPDATE! please!


Name: Harlequin Rundfunk (Signed) · Date: 12/08/06 14:58 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Validate this chapter. [mimes bleeding of the eyes]


Name: potter_fun_addict (Signed) · Date: 12/08/06 10:29 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Some one PLEASE validate this chapter!!!


Name: faolan63 (Signed) · Date: 12/08/06 10:10 · For: Chapter 28: The Final Seal
Wow wow wow wow wow wow.
This is the best fic I have ever read.
Wow wow wow wow wow wow.


Name: abbs866 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/06 11:11 · For: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station
Ugh I can't wait. Please let it validate soon!


Name: hbwallflower (Signed) · Date: 12/05/06 1:10 · For: Chapter 28: The Final Seal
Awww.. I want more. Update soon.


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