Reviewer: danbarn
Date: 12/14/06 20:50
Chapter: Going Home

I really have to say this is an amazingly well thought out story. I read and reread and rereread it all 3 times in the last 2 days, and with its lenght that is somewhat of an accomplishment but it keeps me getting through finals. The plot is so tight, detail oriented and rich it could easily mistake this for JKR's work if it was written in a slightly more british style for a slightly younger age group. I love the roatating POV and I also love how you developed both Ron and Hermonie so well, finding a good way to accelerate their relationship and the positive effects their marriage have on eachother. One thing I get frusterated with some writers even JKR though I suspect she is doing what you are at a slower pace is the development of Ron in particular. He is a much more talented wizard that most would think in my poinion and just needs the confidene of having his love of hirmone expressed and returned in order to become a great wizard, no Harry mind you but a big cut above your average wizard.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Cheers,
Dan

PS without a doubt my favorite fanfic in the general section and either my first or second fav orverall, keep up the excellent work!

Reviewer: danbarn
Date: 12/14/06 20:49
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

I really have to say this is an amazingly well thought out story. I read and reread and rereread it all 3 times in the last 2 days, and with its lenght that is somewhat of an accomplishment but it keeps me getting through finals. The plot is so tight, detail oriented and rich it could easily mistake this for JKR's work if it was written in a slightly more british style for a slightly younger age group. I love the roatating POV and I also love how you developed both Ron and Hermonie so well, finding a good way to accelerate their relationship and the positive effects their marriage have on eachother. One thing I get frusterated with some writers even JKR though I suspect she is doing what you are at a slower pace is the development of Ron in particular. He is a much more talented wizard that most would think in my poinion and just needs the confidene of having his love of hirmone expressed and returned in order to become a great wizard, no Harry mind you but a big cut above your average wizard.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewer: alicepotter
Date: 12/13/06 8:01
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

I love this story!! If someone told me this was the plot of book 7, I would believe them! You have done a really good job so far! I like the different POVs, too.

Great work! Keep the chapters coming!!

Reviewer: niffler trainer
Date: 12/13/06 7:54
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

That was a great chapter! I loved it! Pretty pretty pppplllllleeeeaaaasssseee update!

Reviewer: bmn
Date: 12/12/06 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Great Chapter, great Fanfic

Reviewer: georgiegirl15
Date: 12/12/06 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Good few chapters. Continuing to enjoy story.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/12/06 15:16
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Nice chapter. Maybe some more H/G romance though... it's my favorite

Reviewer: chocofrog90
Date: 12/12/06 13:54
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Great chapter

Reviewer: declan06
Date: 12/12/06 13:00
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

I love this story. I think it is the first I read in the first person. it is a very intresting idea.

Reviewer: Harlequin Rundfunk
Date: 12/12/06 12:58
Chapter: Going Home

Bravo!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 12/12/06 12:36
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Ah! I am DYING for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GreenMan1966
Date: 12/12/06 12:34
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Wow, this is getting really good. I definitely think that last bit - the conversation between Harry & Hermione - was very well written. Whew! I'm sorta misty-eyed!

Reviewer: chocofrog90
Date: 12/11/06 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

PLEASE validate!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Harlequin Rundfunk
Date: 12/10/06 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

This valdiation is taking a rediculously long time

Reviewer: kelly_58
Date: 12/09/06 11:49
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Final Seal

ooooh! wow! your story is absolutly amazing so far! i really love how you tell it by the trio's point of views! oh! please, please update soon! i'm gonna die of boredom if i have nothing to read, and trust me, your story's far better then anything else i've read on here! i wonder what mrs. figg wants to tell harry and how dobby's doing. oh, he's so cute i love dobby so much.
P.S please update.
P.P.S UPDATE! please!

Reviewer: Harlequin Rundfunk
Date: 12/08/06 14:58
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Validate this chapter. [mimes bleeding of the eyes]

Reviewer: potter_fun_addict
Date: 12/08/06 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Some one PLEASE validate this chapter!!!

Reviewer: faolan63
Date: 12/08/06 10:10
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Final Seal

Wow wow wow wow wow wow.
This is the best fic I have ever read.
Wow wow wow wow wow wow.

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 12/05/06 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 29: The Restaurant by the Train Station

Ugh I can't wait. Please let it validate soon!

Reviewer: hbwallflower
Date: 12/05/06 1:10
Chapter: Chapter 28: The Final Seal

Awww.. I want more. Update soon.

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