Reviewer: NiGHTS
Date: 01/09/07 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 34: A Rat with a Silver Paw

Brilliant chapter, sand-dollar !!! The tension is just about unbearable; I'm loving every last line. Also, well done for the rapid updates - makes a pleasant change to actually read a story on here without having 2 wait a month between every chapter !!!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 01/09/07 11:02
Chapter: Chapter 34: A Rat with a Silver Paw

the suspense kills me!
update soon! (you're good at that)

Reviewer: MankyOldBoot
Date: 01/09/07 10:21
Chapter: Chapter 34: A Rat with a Silver Paw

Yikes! I'm skeered, hurry!

Reviewer: Margalot
Date: 01/09/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 34: A Rat with a Silver Paw

Gah! You're making these cliffhangers on purpose, aren't you?

Amazing as always, and of course wonderful, fantastic, etc etc etc.

Reviewer: raveralways
Date: 01/09/07 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 34: A Rat with a Silver Paw

ah, crap! you left me totally hanging. I wasn't expecting the end of that chapter for some reason.

Reviewer: BassWerewolf
Date: 01/08/07 12:17
Chapter: Going Home

This is very well written. I especially enjoy your ability to make use of subtelty so effectively, which is aided even further by your choice to use alternating voices. Its a very interesting decision. I think it really strengthens your writing. Anyway, congratulations on developing such a detailed story line and managing to make it come alive.

Reviewer: Margalot
Date: 01/07/07 18:49
Chapter: Chapter 33: Ron's Plan

Amazing, just like all the other installments. I can't wait for the next bit. Your writing is really fantastic-I love how you use present tense to make it seem more real, more now.

Reviewer: ohgooshxpotter
Date: 01/07/07 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 33: Ron's Plan

This story is simply amazing! It is almost exactly how I pictured book seven! If I didn't know any better, I would say you were JK in disguise (just with shorter chapters).
I can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: chocofrog90
Date: 01/07/07 16:11
Chapter: Chapter 33: Ron's Plan

soo soo amazing! update soon!

Reviewer: dashofmagic
Date: 01/07/07 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 33: Ron's Plan

I love this story!!! Submit a new one soon, please! THis is great stuff!

Reviewer: Margalot
Date: 01/06/07 20:43
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

Ohmigawd! You can't just leave us hanging like that!

Reviewer: potter_fun_addict
Date: 01/06/07 8:36
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

This story keeps getting better!!! Keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: SDhufflepuff
Date: 01/05/07 22:35
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

i love this story.
cant wait to see how it ends
=)

Reviewer: Jenn11
Date: 01/05/07 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

This story is just so awesome. I can't get enough of it. Excellent work!

Reviewer: abbs866
Date: 01/05/07 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

Amazing as always! I love this story - and thsi part was just unbeliveably believable. I felt like I was there! Loved it - tata for now! Abby

Reviewer: MsFiggy
Date: 01/05/07 14:43
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

Excellent chapter! I'm really enjoying your story. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: NiGHTS
Date: 01/05/07 11:58
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

Another terrific chapter, sand_dollar. It's all building up nicely now ...

Reviewer: Harlequin Rundfunk
Date: 01/05/07 11:10
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

another great chapter

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 01/05/07 10:36
Chapter: Chapter 32: The Other Mirror

ooooh big cliffie it's really good thsi story and one of your best chapters by the way.

Reviewer: casiopeia
Date: 01/05/07 7:42
Chapter: Going Home

I've just finished the first chapter and I'm hooked - very nice job! I've seen many other stories that list what each of the characters are thinking, etc., one after another, but this one has a better flow than any other I can remember.
Looking forward to reading mroe!!

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