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Name: simplegirl (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 7:05 · For: Whatsername
i think you should write a new chapter, cause it looks like it should be a new chapter, if not, then it does not ends good, you should also have an answer from hermione. but it was good.

Author's Response: A lot of people tell me to added another chapter, but I like to end it openly. Thanks for the review.


Name: HPwizzzard (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 11:41 · For: Whatsername
Nice. I can totally see Ron forgetting Lavender- we all know he really loved Hermione! It's rather amusing to picture her reaction to the letter- "Why doyou want to know, Won-Won?


Name: HPwizzzard (Signed) · Date: 12/02/06 11:40 · For: Whatsername
Nice. I can totally see Ron forgetting Lavender- we all know he really loved Hermione! It's rather amusing to picture her reaction to the letter- "Why doyou want to know, Won-Won?

Author's Response: Some people have been asking me about doing a sequel, so I might write another chapter about Hermione's reaction or something like that.


Name: Orlaith (Signed) · Date: 09/11/06 7:32 · For: Whatsername
i love the song, which was what made me read it, but you've bent it well to your own plot and it carries the reflective *sadness/thoughtfulness* of the song really well - and of course Ron is perfectly suited to having that sort of forgetfulness. Really well written! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is so sweet. Green Day absolutely rules!


Name: _Hermione_Granger_ (Signed) · Date: 09/10/06 23:30 · For: Whatsername
Well written. very abrupt. good song fic though.

Author's Response: Thank you! I got bored at my dad's office and wrote this in a period of three days. Sorry if it seemed abrupt.


Name: ronnyc718 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/06 22:44 · For: Whatsername
I really liked this story. I'll go back to why later, but I have a nit-pick thing. Isn't Diagon Alley in London? Ron sees the girl in Diagon Alley, but then asks his girlfriend about how London is.

I usually don't like songfics, but you blended the lyrics into the narrative so well that this is a shining example of how these should be. Great, great job!

Author's Response: I knew that I had to have him see somewhere, and the first place I thought about was about Diagon Alley. Sorry! Thank you for the review.

Author's Response: I put Hermione in Scotland now and Ron's in London. Sorry again.


Name: Ginny Weasley 12 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/06 18:21 · For: Whatsername
Great story, me! The song was great, but what happened to the story? It turned to crap toward the middle.

Author's Response: Well, if you wrote the story, you could insult it. Oh wait, I did. Too much sugar waiting for reviewers.


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