i think you should write a new chapter, cause it looks like it should be a new chapter, if not, then it does not ends good, you should also have an answer from hermione. but it was good.
Author's Response: A lot of people tell me to added another chapter, but I like to end it openly. Thanks for the review.
Nice. I can totally see Ron forgetting Lavender- we all know he really loved Hermione! It's rather amusing to picture her reaction to the letter- "Why doyou want to know, Won-Won?
Nice. I can totally see Ron forgetting Lavender- we all know he really loved Hermione! It's rather amusing to picture her reaction to the letter- "Why doyou want to know, Won-Won?
Author's Response: Some people have been asking me about doing a sequel, so I might write another chapter about Hermione's reaction or something like that.
i love the song, which was what made me read it, but you've bent it well to your own plot and it carries the reflective *sadness/thoughtfulness* of the song really well - and of course Ron is perfectly suited to having that sort of forgetfulness. Really well written! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is so sweet. Green Day absolutely rules!
Well written. very abrupt. good song fic though.
Author's Response: Thank you! I got bored at my dad's office and wrote this in a period of three days. Sorry if it seemed abrupt.
I really liked this story. I'll go back to why later, but I have a nit-pick thing. Isn't Diagon Alley in London? Ron sees the girl in Diagon Alley, but then asks his girlfriend about how London is.
I usually don't like songfics, but you blended the lyrics into the narrative so well that this is a shining example of how these should be. Great, great job!
Author's Response: I knew that I had to have him see somewhere, and the first place I thought about was about Diagon Alley. Sorry! Thank you for the review.
Author's Response: I put Hermione in Scotland now and Ron's in London. Sorry again.
Great story, me! The song was great, but what happened to the story? It turned to crap toward the middle.
Author's Response: Well, if you wrote the story, you could insult it. Oh wait, I did. Too much sugar waiting for reviewers.
