omg *sniff* that was beautiful. go molyy, as usual but wow. write nore stories. tonkzie ;)
OMG! This is such a sweet story! You portrayed both characters with such enthusiasm, it was great! Aww...this is absolutely amazing, I almost cried! You portrayed Remus perfectly! "His thumb removed them, to the shock of Tonks. He had never willingly touched her unless he was helping her off the floor. With baited breath, she watched his fingers travel down her face to her lips, which he traced. When he pulled his hand away, it was shaking with suppressed emotions." That was amazing! Great, great job!
OMG! This is such a sweet story! You portrayed both characters with such enthusiasm, it was great! Aww...this is absolutely amazing, I almost cried! You portrayed Remus perfectly! "His thumb removed them, to the shock of Tonks. He had never willingly touched her unless he was helping her off the floor. With baited breath, she watched his fingers travel down her face to her lips, which he traced. When he pulled his hand away, it was shaking with suppressed emotions." That was amazing! Great, great job!
Gosh, that REALLY made me cry... I love it.
Ah, that's so sweet. Very well-written and very believable. I always knew Molly Weasley would play an important part in their get-together. Great job with all the characters. :D
Oh, I loved it so much! I've had a hard time finding a good Remus/tonks fic, but this was perfect! You're amazing!!
This is one of the most beautiful and well written Remus/ Tonks stories that I have read. "And I have read many of them," said the faithful RL/NT shipper.
Aww!!!!!! I love Remus/Tonks! This was well written, too. The one possible mechanics problem I saw was I think selfless is usually one word, not hyphenated. And I really liked how you connected Remus's conscience to his decision to tell Tonks how he felt. The fact that Remus is principled and careful not to hurt other people in any way in an integral part of his character.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and your comments. Everybody likes to have their story praised. ^_^ You're a great reviewer.
*I...LOVE...THIS!!!!!!!-Padfoot
*The writting style is good I like your descibing words!-Prongs *I think your Moony is a bit off charaecter(but not alot!)-Moony
Author's Response: Padfoot- I...LOVE...YOU!!! Prongs- You do? That's awesome. Moony- Really? I didn't think so, but you're the expert.
brilliant!!! this is the 1st Remus/Tonks fic i read i love it!!! bloody brilliant!
Author's Response: Whoa! It's so awesome that I'm your first and you like it. I hope I made some good standards for you to judge the rest by.
That is so cute! I love it! I love the point you got across to Lupin. Thanks for getting it into his head!
MJ
Author's Response: Moi? Pardon, madam, but I think Molly gets the credit. I could never have thought of the argument without her! ;)
Beautiful! Bravo, truly excellent.
~Moony :)
Perfect. What can I say? I love they way you set it, the moods, and the changing POVs. It was just excellent, as if JKR wrote it herself. 15/10
~~Dragon Warrior, reviewer. :-)
Author's Response: Holy pizza! Was I just compared to JKR? I might just faint on the keyboard. You have no idea how happy this makes me... I'm so giddy now... EEK! Thank you so much!
Omg how cute!
Love it!
10/10
samuri rose xxx
Author's Response: Samuri rose? What a creative name. Thanks for the review. I'd review your review... but that's just silly. Thanks!
I love how Remus comes to his senses!! Go Molly! :D A cute, fluffy piece that left me feeling... fluffy!!
Author's Response: LOL! Well, what are sappy, lifeless, romance writers for? So, you like Molly? Me too. She should have a fanclub. I'd join. She's a great character to write.
Aww! This was so cute!!! I loved it!!!
~J-Mo
Author's Response: *hug* Thank you!
