hey great story can't wait to read the rest
brilliant! ohh a cliffhanger. i cant wait for the new chapter!!
ps-brilliant way with words.
righto, great chapter. Can't wait for the 3rd, I need some answers!
Author's Response: thanks. I hope it gives you answers :-)
Great first chappie : )
Author's Response: thank you so much :-)
This is SUCH a good story!
Author's Response: why thank you :-)