good job. i actually really like it. i didnt quiet picture james like that but, i can be perswaided.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.

I love marauder fics and this is no exception. Can't wait to read on, hope the next chapter's up soon... hint, hint. What a cool idea, writing it together i mean, twice as many great ideas. I'm only into the second chapter and already I've found someone to really loath, Rovin, what a slimeball! And James has gone into a love-sick trance, maybe it's a magical disease and only Lily can cure it by liking him. Oh well, just a thought.