Told like J.K.R. would have writtin it.
Very sweet and well-written. Everyone was in character, and I absolutely melted with the scene of Ron and Hermione in the snow! I loved that they held hands all the time too. Poor Ron, having to eat with his left hand!
finally a r/hr-fic from harrys point of view. really good!
Great I loved it! I loved how things went smoothly with Ron and Hermione but I am a big fan of Harry and Luna so im not sure about the Ginny/Harry situation! keep writing!
I think this is great. Very sweet, but not sickly, and very in character.
ok everything was really good, the only thing the messed with my mind was the way Ron came right out and asked Hermione and the way Hermione responded so openly, even if they had forgotten Harry was there....otherwise very nice flow....too bad it was short
SUCH A GOOD STORY! I LOVE IT!
wow that is sooooooo incredibly cute! Really well written, and i LOVE HERMIONE'S GIFT! wow!
ooh, this is really good..... I love romance! The only thing I'm not too hip about is GW/HP. 9/10, and a slot in my favorites!
That was great!!!!
this was so awesome! :D i really loved it! :D
Love it! The way you described how Ron and Hermione felt about each other was really sweet. My favorite thing was the picture. Keep writing, you're good!
Awwwwwwww that was adorable!! I really really enjoyed this fic! Great job! It was wonderful!!
I loved the way that seeing Ron and Hermoine come together that made Harry understand his folks a bit better. Nice connection!
That was great! I loved her gift---melted my heart! Keep writing!
I simply love it....Hope that Ron really do it to Hermione......
that is so wicked!! abosolutely wicked!!! ^.^d
I loved it! I melted right along with my pumpkin ice cream (yes, it exists - and it goes great with HP fan fic!). I loved the "You see, I have long adored you) - and the hand holding and the convo in the snow. You better write another story - you're good ;)
Be gentle? That was amazing! Well done. Very in character and fits my expectations for the series too! I've always pictured a scene like this to eventually come, but couldn't come up with an excuse for another ball...I liked your "avoiding trouble" one! lol