are you going to update?
Author's Response: Um, unfortunately real life has sucked me away from the fanfic world for a while. Who knows? Perhaps with a burst of inspiration, I may update, sometime. But don't take my word for it ;)
Je n'adore pas.
Author's Response: Oh how quickly opinions change, I guess. So now you don't like it? Quel dommage. Pourquoi?
So far? C'est pas mal.
Author's Response: I'm glad you don't think it's bad :] (I speak a bit of French)
That was awesome, I just had to curse Hermione interupting them for the stupid cake cutting!! Ah, oh well, keep writing, I like your story a lot, update soon please!!!
Author's Response: I do apologize that I haven't responded to this or actually updated. I've beenquite busy, but I'll try to get on it.
More soon I hope!
Author's Response: Ahh! Double vision!
Author's Response: Ahh! Double vision!
More soon I hope!
Author's Response: Yes, soon soon!
Oh, it's great! Really great! I can't wait to the next chapter. Keep writing :D
Author's Response: Hey thanks! I'm trying to write Chapter 4, but the beginning isn't coming out right. I should write it in the next two weeks or so.
Nice one! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try!
Very good-the kiss that wasn't....well lets just hope Harry isn't too stuborn when it comes to being with Ginny! Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: I'm gonna try to keep them coming, I'm already writing Chapter 4. Thanks for the review!
Aww
so sad.
I enjoyed the almost-kiss.
It was very juicy.
~Cheers~
Author's Response: Thanks
oh please update!!!
Author's Response: I'll try!
haha. love how Harry keeps running off. good story so far. new chapter post soon, i hope?
Author's Response: Bah...I'm trying to write, but you know...holidays...craziness...but I'll try! Thanks...I loved how he ran off, too. I got part of that idea from Gilmore Girls...
this is really good. i cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll get it up soon!
This is so cute!
I love it!
Update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try!
ooooooooooo! yay! u updated! i was loosing hope...but then u updated! it was kida short but really good
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you very much...don't lose hope, m'dear. I'm just about to start the third chapter!
omg! GREAT STORY! write more! If you want i can proof read it or beta it. heres my email : lisamyer2000@yahoo.com
hit me up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll seriously consider asking you to proofread...thank you again!
Ok, mayve I worded that wrong. I should have said I could guess your age. I think it would be a good idea to extend your vocabulary. I really liked it though. Don't take it the wrong way. It was good, but we can improve everything :-) !
Author's Response: I'm a perfectionist, so your commen will not only make me crazy trying to improve my writing, but it'll actually help me improve my writing!
Hey, I liked it, but I could tell you're a beginner.Try putting in more descriptions. I still like it though!
9/10!
Author's Response: Note to self: Finish next chappy. Anyway, yeah, in the original chapter, there were more descriptions and all that good stuff, but when I was typing and editing, I couldn't put them in because I always ended up on a different track than I wanted to be on.
that was great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
