Good start, the characters were in character which is always extremely refreshing in fan fiction and you are a great writter. only drawback was a small lack of realistic circumstance on how harry was "arranged" to go back to hogwarts. but all things
considered wonderful first chapter!
I like it so far!
Keep up the good work.
I'm interested to read about the locations of the Horcruxes.
This is such a good start! It's almost as if J. K. Rowling wrote it herself! Keep it up!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Dragon_Spirit! Sorry I haven't been up for a while, I sort of thought it wouldn't be validated...expect the next chapter SOON!