Reviewer: MaraudersAffair
Date: 09/06/06 0:27
Chapter: One Shot

Damn, well at least Snape didn't have to kill Dumbledore. I was having trouble following the story because a lot of the situations weren't canon. *slaps face* I need to snap out of it. Draco was very appealing - I loved his feelings for Harry - how he wanted to hurt him. Very good! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Sorry about the confusion!

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 09/05/06 10:35
Chapter: One Shot

Very interesting. You have an awesome way of writing twists and turns. I was pulled into the story so much that I forgot all about the warnings, including the slash one. Nice darkfic and AU stuff. My jaw dropped when I read the "Weasley was dead" sentence. That was completely out of the blue! Good luck in the challenge!

I have a little nit-pick: don't you think the Harry/Draco snogging was a little too abrupt?

Apart from that, great job?

~Mini.

P.S.: Sorry for asking this, but can you kindly read and review my stories if possible?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you liked the story. Yes, the snog-scene was abrupt. But it was a one-shot and, when discussing this on the forum, I reached the conclusion that Harry/Draco would be full of sudden starts and catastrophic breaks. I'll try to get around to review one of your stories.

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