Reviewer: shaunda
Date: 09/19/10 22:06
Chapter: Come Home

ok please write another chapter really soon, im really into this story so try try try to hurry

Reviewer: shaunda
Date: 09/19/10 21:59
Chapter: The Letter


Reviewer: shaunda
Date: 09/19/10 21:51
Chapter: Prologue

really good

Reviewer: sassysorceress95
Date: 10/29/08 8:08
Chapter: Come Home

I wish there was more to read just now...

Reviewer: ginnyluvr21
Date: 04/21/08 14:57
Chapter: Come Home

I loved this far!

Reviewer: LilaBear
Date: 02/07/08 19:50
Chapter: Come Home

How on earth could the final battle happen at Bill's wedding without Arthur knowing? Wouldn't Arthur be at his son's wedding? That's ridiculous.

You also wrote: Hermione looked up at Nymphadora, tears forming in her eyes. She nodded her head 'no'.

It should be "she shook her head 'no'". Nodding is what you do when you mean 'yes' :P

Author's Response: The only reason Arthur asked was for interviewing purposes. Of course he would know. I'm not that dumb. I'm sorry if you found this story ridiculous, but I find this review ridiculously rude. Not even a single complement, eh? My apologies for wasting your time. But thank you for your review. :P

Reviewer: Meralie
Date: 10/07/07 13:53
Chapter: Come Home

It's really well done, I like the format.
Try to finish the next chapter soon :D

Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 09/17/07 19:53
Chapter: Come Home

Before you say anything sis, I reviewed the first chapter way back before you were actualyl my sister. So, beat that! I DID DO 11!

This was a cool chapter though.

The end.

~ Sis

Author's Response: The end. My turn next!!

Reviewer: maze
Date: 06/03/07 8:48
Chapter: Come Home

This story is different. It can get a little confuse but its alright. Interesting and mysterious.Add to my favourites.Keep it coming.

Author's Response: I'll start writing the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: chan
Date: 06/03/07 8:06
Chapter: Come Home

hey whats this ending with a cliffe that too a mysterious one. anyway i enjoyed ur story really well. this is entirely a different style of writing which i enjoyed .please update it faster.i just dont know where this is leading. i am eager to know what comes next.

Author's Response: Thanks! Add to your favorites!!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 05/31/07 18:52
Chapter: Come Home

Please update soon!

Author's Response: Glad to hear I have fans!! Chapter 3 is in queue!! Add to your favorites so you'll get an email when it's validated. :)

Reviewer: allieisabeast
Date: 05/06/07 1:40
Chapter: The Letter

awesomness!!!!!!!!! update soon pleasee!!!

Author's Response: I will! I'm just looking for a new beta right now. The third chappy is written though.

Reviewer: ambar187
Date: 04/19/07 9:28
Chapter: The Letter

this story is getting good i'm interested to know what is going on and where all this is going i can't wait for you to post more

Author's Response: Great! I'm actually looking for a new beta right now for the next chapter. More romance to come!

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 12/16/06 10:26
Chapter: The Letter

Ginny, AKA your fellow Insomniac and GIMP tutor, wants me to tell you that Ginny thinks your story is really good. She likes how you switch from one thing, to the next, to the next, and not have it be a chlice (SP?) Ginny also watns to add to make sure that everyone doesn't get confuesed, because Ginny was. Ginny wants Nicloe to know that she has to finish her review later because Gin_PotterGirl just found her messing with her comeputer.


Author's Response: Oh wow, Gin. Thanks!

Reviewer: honeydukes_10
Date: 12/12/06 14:42
Chapter: Prologue

WOW. Great story, so far. I was going to leave a review for the previous chapter, but I was in such a hurry to get to this one that I didn't want to, lol.

Anyways, if I had left a review on the previous chapter, it would have been something along the lines of: 'Great chapter. A good but evil cliffie. Too bad the second chapter is already up, or I would have been crying right now. I just hope that the next one isn't a cliffie, too. If so, wow, you are evil.'

Unfortunaltely, you did leave us with a cliffie, so you are very evil, indeed. No, I am just joking, you are very, very nice. My only problem with the whole flashback situation: it is way too much jumping around for me. But, don't worry, your story is still awesome, and I am still a loyal reader.

Anyways, overall, great story so far. I hope you update soon with chapter 3!

Author's Response: Thanks for the lengthy review! Glad you like it.

Reviewer: gopotter
Date: 12/12/06 7:05
Chapter: The Letter

When will u continue

Author's Response: I haven't started the third chapter yet, RL and school been keeping me busy. Sorry! I'll start it this weekend.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 12/06/06 16:38
Chapter: The Letter

This is a really interesting story. I look forward to reading more. Congratulations on a very interesting take on a story!

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep your interest!

Date: 12/05/06 19:36
Chapter: The Letter

Very good second chapter Nicole! Even the Queen Of Darkness approves!

Ginny's behavior confused me, but that's okay. Very awesome on a stick!


Author's Response: Thanks, again, Emma! Don't worry, Ginny's behavior will (I'm pretty sure) be sorted out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: harry_kissed_ginny
Date: 12/05/06 15:46
Chapter: The Letter


Author's Response: Okay...

Reviewer: Ron x Hermione
Date: 12/01/06 20:48
Chapter: Prologue

Ooooh! I like the cane for the idea of the last Horcrux. I loved your story, it's very mysterious, great cliffhanger at the end of the chapter.
Good fic so far! It's going on my favorites and I'll be waiting for chapter 2, as it has not bee validated... *sigh*.
Great work! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter 2 in queue!!!

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